In "Modifier trains", 'N V1 V0' should yield 'N V1 (V0 y)'. [That 'N' could be
'x'.]
The absence of y, u, and v from the left column requires substantial study by a
new reader, in the absence of a footnote explaining the format.
In "Conjunctions", the second column should show 'x' and 'y' wherever they are
permitted, for uniformity of recognition and interpretation.
'].' ought to be in red.
For 'x u^:_ y', could say 'apply x& u til convergence'.
Footnotes in "Memory operations" are incomplete.
In "Mathematics", Footnote (a) is not clear, partly since neither u nor v
appear in the example.
The table for 'b.' is missing a bar between '33' and '34'.
The "Multithreading" table, and the NuVoc descriptions, need more detail for
this new type of control.
In "Objects and locatives", Footnote (b) mentions 'o', which has no reference.
I presume that 'x myverb__obj y' means 'run myverb, from locale obj, on y'.
That line should be moved three lines lower.
What effect do 'x' and 'y' have in the last line?
In "Control structures", the various blocks should all be numbered, since not
referring to a single footnoted value.
Footnote (a) could end '... result of [the] last sentence executed'.
Footnote (b) could read '... tests true: if ...'.
Footnote (d) could read 'Arbitrary local names var ...'.
The reference to Footnote (e) inserts a misleading space before 'case.'; it
would be better following 'case.'. The optionality and purpose of the 'f' need
explanation.
To avoid ambiguity, Footnote (h) should read 'Abort current iteration.'
Final line's shading ends short.
In "Explicit definition and assignment", first line could read '{{ text lines
}}' to emphasize structure. The comment could read 'direct explicit entity' to
aid in finding related pages.
In lines 3 and 4, 'verb' is accurate for the example, but 'object' would be
general.
In line 5, 'equivalent' should be 'verb'.
Footnote (i) could say '... a string of space- or comma-separated names.'.
That phrase should also be referenced two lines earlier.
--Art
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