dave2wave commented on a change in pull request #73:
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator/pull/73#discussion_r548722436
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File path: pages/guides/ppmc.ad
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@@ -105,30 +105,30 @@ Body:
Joe Bob has been voted as a new member of the *PODLING* PPMC. the vote thread
is at: *link to the vote thread*
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-*Please note that there is a grace period of 72 hours from when the NOTICE is
sent to the Incubator PMC to when the proposed member should be formally
invited. This is an important part of the overall process. Failure to do this
can result in an embarassing situation for people involved.*
+*Note that there is a grace period of 72 hours from when the PPMC sends the
NOTICE to the IPMC to when the PPMC should formally invite the proposed member.
This is an important part of the overall process. Failure to do this can result
in an embarassing situation for people involved.*
In the email you send, replace *PODLING* with your podling's actual name, and
replace Joe Bob with the person's actual name.
-After 72 hours, Joe Bob should be invited to join the PPMC, using a sample
message like link:ppmc-offer.txt[this].
+After 72 hours, the PPMC should invite Joe Bob to join it, using message like
link:ppmc-offer.txt[this].
Review comment:
Maybe use a genderless name here instead of "Joe Bob"
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