commit:     8efea8b918e6b9f12d8612ed4c9bb498fcdbd33a
Author:     Sam James <sam <AT> gentoo <DOT> org>
AuthorDate: Fri Jun 18 05:03:31 2021 +0000
Commit:     Sam James <sam <AT> gentoo <DOT> org>
CommitDate: Sun Aug  1 02:38:39 2021 +0000
URL:        https://gitweb.gentoo.org/proj/devmanual.git/commit/?id=8efea8b9

ebuild-writing/common-mistakes: reformat 'DESCRIPTION and HOMEPAGE'

Closes: https://github.com/gentoo/devmanual/pull/223
Signed-off-by: Sam James <sam <AT> gentoo.org>

 ebuild-writing/common-mistakes/text.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ebuild-writing/common-mistakes/text.xml 
b/ebuild-writing/common-mistakes/text.xml
index cc87d74..e46a36c 100644
--- a/ebuild-writing/common-mistakes/text.xml
+++ b/ebuild-writing/common-mistakes/text.xml
@@ -413,11 +413,12 @@ SLOT="0"
 <body>
 
 <p>
+Make sure the <c>DESCRIPTION</c> is not overly long. Good descriptions will
+describe the main function of the package in a sentence.
+
 Please check if the <c>HOMEPAGE</c> variable is right and leads users to the
-right page if they want to find out more about the package. And make sure
-the <c>DESCRIPTION</c> is not overly long. Good descriptions will describe
-the main function of the package in a sentence. If no homepage for the package
-is available, set the <c>HOMEPAGE</c> variable to
+right page if they want to find out more about the package. If no homepage for
+the package is available, set the <c>HOMEPAGE</c> variable to
 <c>https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/No_homepage</c>. Please also strive to test
 HTTPS support for the site used in <c>HOMEPAGE</c>.
 </p>

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