neysx       05/05/12 09:40:22

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml
  Log:
  #92318 fixed poor English

Revision  Changes    Path
1.12      +2 -2      xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml?rev=1.12&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml?rev=1.12&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml.diff?r1=1.11&r2=1.12&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml  24 Jan 2005 08:13:25 -0000      1.11
+++ gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml  12 May 2005 09:40:22 -0000      1.12
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml,v 1.11 
2005/01/24 08:13:25 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml,v 1.12 
2005/05/12 09:40:22 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml">
 <title>Gentoo/x86 Installation Tips &amp; Tricks</title>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <note>
-If you are not known to software raid, please read the <uri
+If you are not familiar with software raid, please read the <uri
 
link="http://tldp.org/HOWTO/Software-RAID-HOWTO.html";>Software-RAID-HOWTO</uri>.
 </note>
 



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