fox2mike    05/06/09 18:31:59

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-net-advanced.xml
  Log:
  #95580, typo fixes. Thanks to Earthwings and curtis119 on IRC.

Revision  Changes    Path
1.3       +11 -9     xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml.diff?r1=1.2&r2=1.3&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: hb-net-advanced.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- hb-net-advanced.xml 9 Jun 2005 08:54:49 -0000       1.2
+++ hb-net-advanced.xml 9 Jun 2005 18:31:59 -0000       1.3
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0 -->
 
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml,v 1.3 
2005/06/09 18:31:59 fox2mike Exp $ -->
+
 <sections>
 
 <version>1.1</version>
@@ -179,9 +181,9 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-For a more detailed discussion about dependency,
+For a more detailed discussion about dependency, consult the section
 <uri link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=2&amp;chap=4#doc_chap4">
-consult the Gentoo Handbook</uri>
+ "Writing Init Scripts"</uri> in the Gentoo Handbook.
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -192,7 +194,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Variable names are dynamic. They are normally follow the structure of
+Variable names are dynamic. They normally follow the structure of
 <c>variable_${interface|mac|essid|apmac}</c>. For example, the variable
 <c>dhcpcd_eth0</c> holds the value for dhcpcd options for eth0 and
 <c>dhcpcd_essid</c> holds the value for dhcpcd options when any interface
@@ -201,10 +203,10 @@
 
 <p>
 However, there is no hard and fast rule that states interface names must be
-ethx. Infact, many wireless interfaces have names wlanx, rax as well as ethx.
+ethx. In fact, many wireless interfaces have names like wlanx, rax as well as 
ethx.
 Also, some user defined interfaces such as bridges can be given any name, such
-has foo. To life more interesting, wireless Access Points can have names with
-non alpha-numeric characters in - this is important because you can configure
+as foo. To make life more interesting, wireless Access Points can have names 
with
+non alpha-numeric characters in them - this is important because you can 
configure
 networking parameters per ESSID.
 </p>
 
@@ -216,7 +218,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Another downside of bash is the content of variables - some character need to
+Another downside of bash is the content of variables - some characters need to
 be escaped. This can be achived by placing the \ character in front of the
 character that needs to be escaped. Below is a list of characters that need
 to be escaped in this way.
@@ -239,8 +241,8 @@
 <comment># This does work, but the domain is invalid</comment>
 dns_domain_My____NET="My \"\\ NET"
 
-<comment># The above sets the dns domain to My \" NET when a wireless card
-# connects to an AP whose ESSID is My \" NET</comment>
+<comment># The above sets the dns domain to My "\ NET when a wireless card
+# connects to an AP whose ESSID is My "\ NET</comment>
 </pre>
 
 </body>



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