swift       05/06/14 10:08:50

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-net-start.xml
  Log:
  Remove use of <br/>, add caption for pre, add ending period where necesasry.

Revision  Changes    Path
1.2       +8 -8      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-start.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-start.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-start.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-start.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: hb-net-start.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-start.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- hb-net-start.xml    9 Jun 2005 07:33:59 -0000       1.1
+++ hb-net-start.xml    14 Jun 2005 10:08:50 -0000      1.2
@@ -2,12 +2,12 @@
 <!DOCTYPE sections SYSTEM "/dtd/book.dtd">
 
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
-<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0 -->
+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
 <sections>
 
-<version>1.0</version>
-<date>2005-06-06</date>
+<version>1.1</version>
+<date>2005-06-14</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Getting started</title>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 to <c>net.eth0</c> in <path>/etc/init.d</path>
 </p>
 
-<pre>
+<pre caption="Symlinking net.eth0 to net.lo">
 # <i>cd /etc/init.d</i>
 # <i>ln -s net.lo net.eth0</i>
 </pre>
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@
 <p>
 Gentoo's RC system now knows about that interface. It also needs to know how
 to configure the new interface. All the network interfaces are configured in
-<path>/etc/conf.d/net</path>.<br/>
-Below is a sample configuration for DHCP and static addresses.
+<path>/etc/conf.d/net</path>. Below is a sample configuration for DHCP and 
+static addresses.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Examples for /etc/conf.d/net">
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 </note>
 
 <note>
-CIDR stands for Classless InterDomain Routing.<br/>
+CIDR stands for Classless InterDomain Routing. 
 Originally, IPv4 addresses were classified as A, B, or C.
 The early classification system did not envision the massive popularity of the
 Internet, and is in danger of running out of new unique addresses. CIDR is an
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 <impo>
 When troubleshooting networking, it is recommended to set RC_VERBOSE="yes"
 in <path>/etc/conf.d/rc</path> so that you get more information about what's
-happening
+happening.
 </impo>
 
 <p>



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