smithj      05/06/26 12:23:21

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml
  Log:
  minor english grammer fix for #97075 (again)

Revision  Changes    Path
1.6       +10 -6     xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml?rev=1.6&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml?rev=1.6&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml.diff?r1=1.5&r2=1.6&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml      25 Jun 2005 23:08:24 -0000      1.5
+++ gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml      26 Jun 2005 12:23:21 -0000      1.6
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml,v 1.5 
2005/06/25 23:08:24 smithj Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml,v 1.6 
2005/06/26 12:23:21 smithj Exp $ -->
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/gentoo-sparc-netboot-howto.xml">
 <title>Gentoo Linux based Netboot HOWTO</title>
@@ -608,10 +608,11 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If the netboot server is a Gentoo/LINUX system and experience problems
+If the netboot server is a Gentoo/LINUX system and experiences problems
 installing the rarpd and tftpd packages, please search http://forums.gentoo.org
-and <uri>http://bugs.gentoo.org</uri> to see if this problem has been 
encountered by anyone else.  If it has not, or the solutions found do not work, 
then
-please open a new bug at <uri>http://bugs.gentoo.org</uri>
+and <uri>http://bugs.gentoo.org</uri> to see if this problem has been
+encountered by anyone else.  If it has not, or the solutions found do not work,
+then please open a new bug at <uri>http://bugs.gentoo.org</uri>
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -619,7 +620,9 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-This is presumably because the file your system is trying to load from the 
tftpboot server is not available.  On a SPARC system, you would probably see 
the following;
+This is presumably because the file your system is trying to load from the
+tftpboot server is not available.  On a SPARC system, you would probably see
+the following;
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Booting appears to hang">
@@ -633,7 +636,8 @@
 once this file exists, the client will try to load it.  Sometimes, when
 the file is missing originally, it will freeze downloading the file once it
 appears.  To resolve this, just get back to an OBP prompt, and issue the 
-"boot net" command again.   The host should then start downloading the 
tftpboot image and boot the OS.
+"boot net" command again. The host should then start downloading the tftpboot
+image and boot the OS.
 </p>
 
 <p>



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