swift       05/07/05 08:45:36

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1 handbook-ppc64.xml
  Log:
  Adding PPC64 changes for networkless install

Revision  Changes    Path
1.2       +16 -18    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: handbook-ppc64.xml
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RCS file: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- handbook-ppc64.xml  5 Jul 2005 08:34:23 -0000       1.1
+++ handbook-ppc64.xml  5 Jul 2005 08:45:36 -0000       1.2
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
 <!DOCTYPE book SYSTEM "/dtd/book.dtd">
 
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml,v
 1.1 2005/07/05 08:34:23 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/handbook-ppc64.xml,v
 1.2 2005/07/05 08:45:36 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <book link="handbook-ppc64.xml">
-<title>Gentoo Linux PPC64 Handbook</title>
+<title>Gentoo Linux 2005.1 PPC64 Handbook</title>
 
 <author title="Author">
   <mail link="[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Sven Vermeulen</mail>
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 </abstract>
 
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
-<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0 -->
+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
 <version>4.0</version>
@@ -128,18 +128,17 @@
 <chapter>
 <title>About the Gentoo Linux Installation</title>
 <abstract>
-This chapter introduces you to the installation approach documented in this
-part.
+Users not familiar with Gentoo do not always know that choice is what
+Gentoo is all about.
 </abstract>
   <include href="hb-install-about.xml"/>
 </chapter>
 
 <chapter>
-<title>Choosing the Right Installation Medium</title>
+<title>Booting the Universal Installation CD</title>
 <abstract>
-You can install Gentoo in many ways. This chapter explains how to install 
Gentoo
-using the minimal Installation CD although installation through the Universal 
-Installation CD is possible as well.
+Using our Universal Installation CD you can boot up your system into a running
+environment that allows you to install Gentoo.
 </abstract>
   <include href="hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml"/>
 </chapter>
@@ -147,8 +146,8 @@
 <chapter>
 <title>Configuring your Network</title>
 <abstract>
-To be able to download the latest source code, you will need to setup
-networking.
+If you need networking, this is the place where the network (and Internet
+connection) is configured.
 </abstract>
   <include href="hb-install-network.xml"/>
 </chapter>
@@ -165,18 +164,17 @@
 <chapter>
 <title>Installing the Gentoo Installation Files</title>
 <abstract>
-Gentoo installs work through so-called stage-files. In this chapter we describe
-how you extract a stage-file and configure Portage.
+In this chapter we describe how you extract a stage3 file and how to configure
+Portage.
 </abstract>
   <include href="hb-install-stage.xml"/>
 </chapter>
 
 <chapter>
-<title>Installing the Gentoo Base System</title>
+<title>Chrooting into the Gentoo Base System</title>
 <abstract>
-Independent of what stage you chose, the eventual result is that you have a
-Gentoo base system at your disposal. This chapter describes how to progress to
-that stadium.
+Now that the stage3 file is extracted, we chroot into the new system and modify
+the USE variable.
 </abstract>
   <include href="hb-install-system.xml"/>
 </chapter>
@@ -225,7 +223,7 @@
 <title>Finalizing your Gentoo Installation</title>
 <abstract>
 You're almost done. We'll just create one (or more) users for your
-system.
+system and (optionally) install prebuilt packages.
 </abstract>
   <include href="hb-install-finalise.xml"/>
 </chapter>



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