fox2mike 05/09/09 07:49:22 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml Log: #104958 - Minor grammar fixes, thanks to vanquirius. Seems someone fixed most of them and didn't close the bug.
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