nightmorph    06/02/22 20:35:54

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0 hb-install-gtkfe.xml
  Log:
  grammar fixes for the kernel parameter section

Revision  Changes    Path
1.4       +3 -3      
xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml.diff?r1=1.3&r2=1.4&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: hb-install-gtkfe.xml
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RCS file: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- hb-install-gtkfe.xml        17 Feb 2006 20:23:08 -0000      1.3
+++ hb-install-gtkfe.xml        22 Feb 2006 20:35:54 -0000      1.4
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
 <!DOCTYPE sections SYSTEM "/dtd/book.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml,v
 1.3 2006/02/17 20:23:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gtkfe.xml,v
 1.4 2006/02/22 20:35:54 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <!--  The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!--  See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
@@ -268,8 +268,8 @@
 
 <p>
 If you jumpered your harddrive because the BIOS can't handle large harddrives
-you'll need to append <c>hdx=stroke</c> or for instance, if you have SCSI
-devices, you should add <c>doscsi</c> as kernel option. 
+you'll need to append <c>hdx=stroke</c>. If you have SCSI devices, you should
+add <c>doscsi</c> as a kernel option.
 </p>
 
 <!-- do we need to cover all the stuff about lilo/grub and kernel parameter



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