nightmorph 06/04/12 17:47:04 Modified: apache-upgrading.xml Log: Minor spelling/grammar fixes. **no content change**
Revision Changes Path 1.5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml.diff?r1=1.4&r2=1.5&cvsroot=gentoo Index: apache-upgrading.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- apache-upgrading.xml 6 Mar 2006 09:18:30 -0000 1.4 +++ apache-upgrading.xml 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 -0000 1.5 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v 1.4 2006/03/06 09:18:30 neysx Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v 1.5 2006/04/12 17:47:04 nightmorph Exp $ --> <guide link="/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml" lang="en"> <title>Upgrading Apache</title> @@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ <body> <p> -The state of Apache and it's modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There -were a number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining -everything the Apache herd is responsible for difficult: +The state of Apache and its modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There were a +number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining everything +the Apache herd is responsible for difficult: </p> <ul> @@ -85,9 +85,9 @@ </p> <p> -First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do -this using the <c>equery</c> tool, part of the <c>app-portage/gentoolkit</c> -package. +First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do this +using the <c>equery</c> tool, which is part of the +<c>app-portage/gentoolkit</c> package. </p> <pre caption="Finding packages to update"> @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ </pre> <impo> -The packages you have installed may be vastly different, make sure you run this +The packages you have installed may be vastly different; make sure you run this command for yourself. </impo> -- [email protected] mailing list
