jkt         06/06/17 11:26:54

  Modified:             altinstall.xml
  Log:
  Added some <c>s, <path>s, s/iso/ISO/, s/portage/Portage/

Revision  Changes    Path
1.61                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml?rev=1.61&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml?rev=1.61&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml.diff?r1=1.60&r2=1.61&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: altinstall.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.60
retrieving revision 1.61
diff -u -r1.60 -r1.61
--- altinstall.xml      8 Aug 2005 00:05:39 -0000       1.60
+++ altinstall.xml      17 Jun 2006 11:26:53 -0000      1.61
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.60 
2005/08/08 00:05:39 smithj Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.61 
2006/06/17 11:26:53 jkt Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/altinstall.xml">
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 
 <license/>
 
-<version>0.65</version>
+<version>0.66</version>
 <date>2005-08-07</date>
 
 <chapter>
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Also, know that some of portage's FEATURES will not work in knoppix. Especially
+Also, know that some of Portage's FEATURES will not work in knoppix. Especially
 watch out for <c>userpriv</c> and <c>usersandbox</c>. If you find yourself
 getting errors, it might be wise to disable some or all of the optional
 features.
@@ -251,11 +251,11 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Burn an Install CD iso.
+Burn an Install CD ISO.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Get the latest portage snapshot from
+Get the latest Portage snapshot from
 <uri>http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/gentoo/snapshots/</uri>
 (or your favorite <uri
 link="http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/mirrors.xml";>mirror</uri>). Either place
@@ -267,12 +267,12 @@
 Follow all instructions of the Gentoo Installation Handbook up to <c>chroot
 /mnt/gentoo</c> in Chapter 6. If you only have one CD-ROM remember to use the
 <c>docache</c> option while booting so you can unmount the Install CD and mount
-your portage snapshot CD.
+your Portage snapshot CD.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 Open a new console (Alt-F2), we will continue with the Install Doc up to
-running the bootstrap.sh script.
+running the <c>bootstrap.sh</c> script.
 </p>
 
 <warn>
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Go back to the first console (Alt-F1, without chroot) and mount a second CD on
-<path>/mnt/gentoo/mnt/cdrom2</path>. Copy the portage tarball from cdrom2 and
+<path>/mnt/gentoo/mnt/cdrom2</path>. Copy the Portage tarball from cdrom2 and
 unpack it to <path>/mnt/gentoo/usr</path>.
 </p>
 
@@ -296,9 +296,10 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Switch back to the F2 console. Now if you try to run bootstrap.sh it will fail
-because it won't be able to download any files. We will fetch these files
-somewhere else and put them in /usr/portage/distfiles (on F2 console).
+Switch back to the F2 console. Now if you try to run <c>bootstrap.sh</c> it 
will
+fail because it won't be able to download any files. We will fetch these files
+somewhere else and put them in <path>/usr/portage/distfiles</path> (on F2
+console).
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -307,7 +308,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <note>
-Note that you need the versions of each package synced with your portage tree.
+Note that you need the versions of each package synced with your Portage tree.
 </note>
 
 <pre caption="Getting the download listing">



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