rane        06/06/29 12:26:23

  Modified:             gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
  Log:
  fixing a number of typos, no content change

Revision  Changes    Path
1.55                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.55&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.55&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml.diff?r1=1.54&r2=1.55&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.54
retrieving revision 1.55
diff -u -r1.54 -r1.55
--- gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 29 Jun 2006 12:11:00 -0000      1.54
+++ gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 29 Jun 2006 12:26:23 -0000      1.55
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.54 
2006/06/29 12:11:00 rane Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.55 
2006/06/29 12:26:23 rane Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 a rough estimate of the time you need to complete your install)</comment>
 
 # <i>grep bogo /proc/cpuinfo</i>
-bogomip       : 3337.81
+bogomips       : 3337.81
 
 # <i>hdparm -tT /dev/sda</i>
 /dev/sda:
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 be detected and all modules will be loaded. If the kernel fails to boot
 properly or if your computer hangs during the boot procedure, you may have to
 experience with different configurations. The safest way is probably to use the
-<c>nodetect</c> option and then load required modules explicitely.
+<c>nodetect</c> option and then load required modules explicitly.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Boot the minimal CD">
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Alternatively, you can start networking manually. The following example assigns
-the IP addess 192.168.1.10 to your PC and defines 192.168.1.1 as your router
+the IP address 192.168.1.10 to your PC and defines 192.168.1.1 as your router
 and name server.
 </p>
 
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Connect to your new box from another PC">
-<comment>(Use the IP addess of your new box)</comment>
+<comment>(Use the IP address of your new box)</comment>
 $ <i>ssh [EMAIL PROTECTED]</i>
 The authenticity of host '192.168.1.10 (192.168.1.10)' can't be established.
 RSA key fingerprint is 96:e7:2d:12:ac:9c:b0:94:90:9f:40:89:b0:45:26:8f.
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@
 <comment>(Look for the IP of your new PC and delete the line,
 then save the file and exit nano)</comment>
 
-<comment>(Use the IP addess of your new box)</comment>
+<comment>(Use the IP address of your new box)</comment>
 $ <i>ssh [EMAIL PROTECTED]</i>
 The authenticity of host '192.168.1.10 (192.168.1.10)' can't be established.
 RSA key fingerprint is 96:e7:2d:12:ac:9c:b0:94:90:9f:40:89:b0:45:26:8f.



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