nightmorph    06/12/27 20:12:19

  Modified:             hb-desktop-graphical.xml
  Log:
  started expanding the graphical desktop chapter. TODO next: xfce. note: i'll 
try not to only focus on adding to swift's old stuff; rest assured this won't 
suck me away from my GDP duties. :)

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http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/complete/hb-desktop-graphical.xml?r1=1.6&r2=1.7

Index: hb-desktop-graphical.xml
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RCS file: 
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retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- hb-desktop-graphical.xml    9 Apr 2006 12:39:32 -0000       1.6
+++ hb-desktop-graphical.xml    27 Dec 2006 20:12:19 -0000      1.7
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
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-<!-- $Header: 
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+<!-- $Header: 
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 1.7 2006/12/27 20:12:19 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
-<version>0.0</version>
-<date>2005-06-19</date>
+<version>0.1</version>
+<date>2006-12-27</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>The X server</title>
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-With KDE, users are offered a full-blown environment with a plethora on desktop
+With KDE, users are offered a full-blown environment with a plethora of desktop
 utilities. It seems as if the KDE project tries to contain everything a user
 might require from a desktop: games, development tools, office suites, imaging
 support, multimedia tools, desklets, system utilities, ... and all those build
@@ -115,13 +115,14 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The KDE project maintains much documentation (in various languages) and offers 
a
-quick release cycle with new features and fixes available at every new release.
-You'll find that the integration of the tools is flawless (the address book is
-linked from the Personal Information Management tool <c>kontact</c>, E-mail
-client <c>kmail</c>, Event Manager <c>kjournal</c> and of course the Address
-book maintenance tool <c>kaddressbook</c>) and the configuration interface
-<c>kcontrol</c> complete and well documented.
+The <uri link="http://www.kde.org";>KDE project</uri> maintains much
+documentation (in various languages) and offers a quick release cycle with new
+features and fixes available at every new release.  You'll find that the
+integration of the tools is flawless (the address book is linked from the
+Personal Information Management tool <c>kontact</c>, E-mail client 
<c>kmail</c>,
+Event Manager <c>kjournal</c> and of course the Address book maintenance tool
+<c>kaddressbook</c>) and the configuration interface <c>kcontrol</c> complete
+and well documented.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -136,25 +137,26 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-The GNOME Foundation offers a consistent desktop environment (GNOME) which
-is developed using strict guidelines, offering a maximum on usability (layout
-and such is strictly defined). Many GNOME zealots are proud of their 
environment
-because it is simple to use, yet powerful and fully functional.
+The GNOME Foundation offers a consistent desktop environment (GNOME) which is
+developed using strict guidelines, offering a maximum on usability (layout and
+so on are strictly defined). Many GNOME enthusiasts are proud of their
+environment because it is simple to use, yet powerful and fully functional.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 When you load up GNOME, you will notice that its interface is sober but well
 designed: the GNOME menu limits itself to the tools you'll most likely use 
while
-hiding the rest of the tools that probably confuses most of the users anyway.
+hiding the rest of the tools that probably confuse most of the users anyway.
 The window decoration is simple, but gives a nice finished look. Configuration
-options are limited at first sight and very easy to comprehend. Real
+options are limited at first sight but are very easy to comprehend. Real
 configuration gurus know that GNOME has a very extended configuration model, 
but
 it is hidden from the interface because most users wouldn't need it anyway.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The GNOME project has multi-lingual documentation and a good network of related
-sites where you can find the latest news about GNOME and GNOME tools. 
+The <uri link="http://www.gnome/org";>GNOME project</uri> has multi-lingual
+documentation and a good network of related sites where you can find the latest
+news about GNOME and GNOME tools. 
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -254,10 +256,18 @@
 full-featured office suite which uses a standard office file format and 
supports
 Microsoft Office documents to a great extend. There is also the <uri
 link="http://www.gnome.org/gnome-office/";>GNOME Office</uri>, a set of
-separately developed applications for Word processing, Spreadsheet calculations
+separately developed applications for word processing, spreadsheet calculations
 and database access.
 </p>
 
+<p>
+<uri link="http://www.abisource.ocom";>AbiWord</uri> is a good choice if you 
will
+only be doing word processing. AbiWord is a full-featured word processor that 
is
+much lighter and faster than OpenOffice, while still retaining complete
+interoperability with industry-standard document types. Additionally, AbiWord
+integrates particularly well with the GNOME desktop.
+</p>
+
 </body>
 </subsection>
 </section>



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