nightmorph 07/01/03 15:04:27 Modified: vdr-guide.xml Log: more grammar & sentence rephrasing stuff that i should have caught in the last update, purely englishification stuff, hence no revbump. thanks to diox for catching it and for the patch, bug 159142
Revision Changes Path 1.6 xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml?rev=1.6&view=markup plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml?rev=1.6&content-type=text/plain diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml?r1=1.5&r2=1.6 Index: vdr-guide.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml,v retrieving revision 1.5 retrieving revision 1.6 diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6 --- vdr-guide.xml 3 Jan 2007 00:58:38 -0000 1.5 +++ vdr-guide.xml 3 Jan 2007 15:04:27 -0000 1.6 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml,v 1.5 2007/01/03 00:58:38 nightmorph Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml,v 1.6 2007/01/03 15:04:27 nightmorph Exp $ --> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> <guide link="/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml"> @@ -153,11 +153,11 @@ <body> <p> -It's recommended to mark every driver as module, so that you can to add the +It's recommended to mark every driver as module, so that you can add the required module dynamically, especially if you don't know the module name. If -you know the module name already, select the driver as a built-in driver. -Compile the kernel, install the modules and boot it. Check to see if your kernel -has successfully detected your card by using <c>dmesg</c>. +you already know the module name, select the driver as a built-in driver. +Compile the kernel, install the modules and boot it. You can check if your +kernel has successfully detected your card by using <c>dmesg</c>. </p> <pre caption="Checking kernel output"> @@ -301,9 +301,9 @@ </pre> <p> -Now it should be possible to watch <c>lircd</c> running and decoding key-presses. -Just run the command <c>irw</c>. Stop it with pressing Ctrl+C when you have -enough. +Now it should be possible to watch <c>lircd</c> capturing and decoding key +presses. Just run the command <c>irw</c>. Stop it by pressing Ctrl+C when you +have enough. </p> <pre caption="Testing LIRC"> @@ -374,8 +374,8 @@ </pre> <p> -em8300-modules needs some configuration that depends on the exact used -revision of the card. +The em8300 module need some configuration that depends on the exact revision of +that card. </p> <!-- @@ -493,9 +493,9 @@ </pre> <p> -If you only want to use <c>vdr-xineliboutput</c> to view the picture -on the same PC running VDR you can now -<uri link="#channel_list">continue with configuring your channel-list</uri>. +If you only want to use <c>vdr-xineliboutput</c> to view the picture on the same +computer as the one running VDR you can continue with <uri +link="#channel_list">configuring your channel list</uri>. </p> <p> @@ -532,13 +532,10 @@ <body> <p> -To make VDR really useful you need to create an appropriate channel list. -</p> - -<p> -There is more than one way to get a working list of channels (besides -downloading one). The channel list installed by default is for DVB-S reception -on Astra on 19.2°E. +To make VDR really useful you need to create an appropriate channel list. There +is more than one way to get a working list of channels (besides downloading +one). The channel list installed by default is for DVB-S reception on Astra on +19.2°E. </p> </body> -- [email protected] mailing list
