neysx       07/04/11 10:17:50

  Modified:             gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
                        gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
  Log:
  Made quick guides consistent, fixed prompts and time zone setting

Revision  Changes    Path
1.73                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml

file : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.73&view=markup
plain: 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.73&content-type=text/plain
diff : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?r1=1.72&r2=1.73

Index: gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.72
retrieving revision 1.73
diff -u -r1.72 -r1.73
--- gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 10 Apr 2007 19:37:05 -0000      1.72
+++ gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 11 Apr 2007 10:17:50 -0000      1.73
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.72 
2007/04/10 19:37:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.73 
2007/04/11 10:17:50 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
-<version>15</version>
-<date>2007-04-10</date>
+<version>16</version>
+<date>2007-04-11</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
 <path>releases/x86/&lt;release&gt;/livecd</path>. The <e>minimal</e>
 installation CD is only useful for Internet-based installations.  You can use
 the <e>LiveCD</e> to perform a networkless installation as documented in the
-<uri link="/doc/en/handbook/2006.1/handbook-x86.xml">2006.1 x86 installation
+<uri link="/doc/en/handbook/2007.0/handbook-x86.xml">2007.0 x86 installation
 handbook</uri>. The minimal CD is recommended.
 </p>
 
@@ -324,13 +324,12 @@
 <pre caption="Download a stage3 archive">
 livecd ~ # <i>cd /mnt/gentoo</i>
 livecd gentoo # <i>links http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/mirrors.xml</i>
-<comment>(Pick a mirror, move to the releases/x86/current/stages directory
-highlight the stage3 of your choice, probably stage3-i686-2006.1.tar.bz2
-and press D to download it)</comment>
+<comment>(Pick a mirror, move to the releases/x86/current/stages directory 
highlight the
+stage3 of your choice, probably the i686 stage3 and press D to download 
it)</comment>
 
 <comment>(<b>Or</b> download it directly with wget without choosing a nearby 
mirror)</comment>
 livecd ~ # <i>cd /mnt/gentoo</i>
-livecd gentoo # <i>wget 
http://gentoo.osuosl.org/releases/x86/current/stages/stage3-i686-2006.1.tar.bz2</i>
+livecd gentoo # <i>wget 
ftp://gentoo.osuosl.org/pub/gentoo/releases/x86/current/stages/stage3-i686*tar.bz2</i>
 </pre>
 
 <pre caption="Unpack the stage3 archive">
@@ -389,19 +388,17 @@
 </body>
 </section>
 <section>
-<title>Set your timezone</title>
+<title>Set your time zone</title>
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Set your time zone information by setting the timezone listing from
-<path>/usr/share/zoneinfo</path> in <path>/etc/conf.d/clock</path>.
+Set your time zone information by copying the correct file from
+<path>/usr/share/zoneinfo</path> over the <path>/etc/localtime</path> file.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Setting your timezone">
-<comment>(Using CET as an example)</comment>
-livecd / # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/clock</i>
-TIMEZONE="CET"
-
+<comment>(Using Brussels as an example)</comment>
+livecd / # <i>cp /usr/share/zoneinfo/Europe/Brussels /etc/localtime</i>
 livecd / # <i>date</i>
 Wed Mar  8 00:46:05 CET 2006
 </pre>
@@ -516,16 +513,25 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Check the system configuration in <path>/etc/rc.conf</path>, 
-<path>/etc/conf.d/rc</path>, <path>/etc/conf.d/keymaps</path>,
-<path>/etc/conf.d/clock</path> and edit any of those files if required.
+Edit <path>/etc/conf.d/clock</path> to define the time zone you used
+previously.
+</p>
+
+<pre caption="Edit /etc/conf.d/clock">
+livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/clock</i>
+TIMEZONE="Europe/Brussels"
+</pre>
+
+<p>
+Check the system configuration in <path>/etc/rc.conf</path>,
+<path>/etc/conf.d/rc</path>, <path>/etc/conf.d/keymaps</path> and edit any of
+those files if required.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Optional: edit some config files">
 livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/rc.conf</i>
 livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/rc</i>
 livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/keymaps</i>
-livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/clock</i>
 </pre>
 
 </body>
@@ -759,8 +765,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Define locales">
-mybox # <i>cd /etc</i>
-mybox # <i>nano -w locale.gen</i>
+mybox ~ # <i>cd /etc</i>
+mybox etc # <i>nano -w locale.gen</i>
 </pre>
 
 <p>



1.12                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml

file : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.12&view=markup
plain: 
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diff : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?r1=1.11&r2=1.12

Index: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml       26 Feb 2007 08:58:04 -0000      
1.11
+++ gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml       11 Apr 2007 10:17:50 -0000      
1.12
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v 
1.11 2007/02/26 08:58:04 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v 
1.12 2007/04/11 10:17:50 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
-<version>6</version>
-<date>2007-02-26</date>
+<version>7</version>
+<date>2007-04-11</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
 <path>releases/x86/&lt;release&gt;/livecd</path>. The <e>minimal</e>
 installation CD is only useful for Internet-based installations.  You can use
 the <e>LiveCD</e> to perform a networkless installation as documented in the
-<uri link="/doc/en/handbook/2006.1/handbook-x86.xml">2006.1 x86 installation
+<uri link="/doc/en/handbook/2007.0/handbook-x86.xml">2007.0 x86 installation
 handbook</uri>. The minimal CD is recommended.
 </p>
 
@@ -547,12 +547,11 @@
 
 <pre caption="Download a stage3 archive">
 livecd gentoo # <i>links http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/mirrors.xml</i>
-<comment>(Pick a mirror, move to the releases/x86/current/stages directory
-highlight the stage3 of your choice, probably stage3-i686-2006.1.tar.bz2
-and press D to download it)</comment>
+<comment>(Pick a mirror, move to the releases/x86/current/stages directory 
highlight the
+stage3 of your choice, probably the i686 stage3 and press D to download 
it)</comment>
 
 <comment>(<b>Or</b> download it directly with wget without choosing a nearby 
mirror)</comment>
-livecd gentoo # <i>wget 
http://gentoo.osuosl.org/releases/x86/current/stages/stage3-i686-2006.1.tar.bz2</i>
+livecd gentoo # <i>wget 
ftp://gentoo.osuosl.org/pub/gentoo/releases/x86/current/stages/stage3-i686*tar.bz2</i>
 </pre>
 
 <pre caption="Unpack the stage3 archive">
@@ -611,7 +610,7 @@
 </body>
 </section>
 <section>
-<title>Set your timezone</title>
+<title>Set your time zone</title>
 <body>
 
 <p>
@@ -766,16 +765,25 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
+Edit <path>/etc/conf.d/clock</path> to define the time zone you used
+previously.
+</p>
+
+<pre caption="Edit /etc/conf.d/clock">
+livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/clock</i>
+TIMEZONE="Europe/Brussels"
+</pre>
+
+<p>
 Check the system configuration in <path>/etc/rc.conf</path>,
-<path>/etc/conf.d/rc</path>, <path>/etc/conf.d/keymaps</path>,
-<path>/etc/conf.d/clock</path> and edit any of those files if required.
+<path>/etc/conf.d/rc</path>, <path>/etc/conf.d/keymaps</path> and edit any of
+those files if required.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Optional: edit some config files">
 livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/rc.conf</i>
 livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/rc</i>
 livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/keymaps</i>
-livecd conf.d # <i>nano -w /etc/conf.d/clock</i>
 </pre>
 
 </body>



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