nightmorph    07/07/09 08:35:05

  Modified:             jffnms.xml
  Log:
  miscellaneous typo and proper English fixes, no content change

Revision  Changes    Path
1.5                  xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml

file : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml?rev=1.5&view=markup
plain: 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/plain
diff : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml?r1=1.4&r2=1.5

Index: jffnms.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- jffnms.xml  18 Nov 2006 18:34:27 -0000      1.4
+++ jffnms.xml  9 Jul 2007 08:35:04 -0000       1.5
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml,v 1.4 
2006/11/18 18:34:27 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml,v 1.5 
2007/07/09 08:35:04 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/jffnms.xml" lang="en">
 <title>Jffnms Installation and Setup Guide</title>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 <date>2006-11-18</date>
 
 <chapter>
-<title>Jffms Basics</title>
+<title>Jffnms Basics</title>
 <section>
 <title>Introduction</title>
 <body>
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 <tr>
   <ti><c>snmp</c></ti>
   <ti>
-    Adds suport for snmp, which enables jffms to gather data from other hosts.
+    Adds suport for snmp, which enables jffnms to gather data from other hosts.
   </ti>
 </tr>
 </table>
@@ -78,9 +78,9 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Being written in PHP, Jffnms is heavily dependent on php USE Flags.  In order
-to install Jffnms successfully, it is required that you have your php package
-installed with (at least) the following USE flags:
+Being written in PHP, Jffnms is heavily dependent on php USE Flags. In order to
+install Jffnms successfully, you are required to have your php package 
installed
+with (at least) the following USE flags:
 </p>
 
 <table>
@@ -199,9 +199,9 @@
 
 <p>
 Now that apache is running, it is time to configure PHP. Jffnms requires that
-you set some variables in php.ini in order to run. The php.ini file is usually
-located in <path>/etc/php/apache2-php4/php.ini</path>. You have to set these
-variables to the following values:
+you set some variables in php.ini in order to run. The <path>php.ini</path> 
file
+is usually located in <path>/etc/php/apache2-php4/php.ini</path>. You have to
+set these variables to the following values:
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Configuring PHP">
@@ -283,8 +283,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <note>
-If you don't use <path>/usr/portage</path> as your portage dir ($PORTDIR) you
-have to change the last part of these commands to whatever your portage dir
+If you don't use <path>/usr/portage</path> as your Portage dir ($PORTDIR) you
+have to change the last part of these commands to whatever your Portage dir
 is.
 </note>
 
@@ -326,8 +326,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <note>
-If you don't use <path>/usr/portage</path> as your portage dir ($PORTDIR) you
-have to change the last part of these commands to whatever your portage dir
+If you don't use <path>/usr/portage</path> as your Portage dir ($PORTDIR) you
+have to change the last part of these commands to whatever your Portage dir
 is.
 </note>
 
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@
 
 <p>
 By now, Jffnms should be correctly installed on your system. You still need,
-however, to configure Jffms. Luckily, Jffnms provides us with an easy to use
+however, to configure Jffnms. Luckily, Jffnms provides us with an easy to use
 web page where it's possible to configure access to database, user access as
 well as check if the current host configuration suffices Jffnms needs. You can
 access this web interface through the following URL:



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