nightmorph 10/01/26 20:45:08
Modified: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
Log:
Make it extra clear that this guide is for experienced users who just need an
installation checklist. Easier to do than the complete rename suggested by
302363
Revision Changes Path
1.25 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.25&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.25&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?r1=1.24&r2=1.25
Index: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
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RCS file:
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retrieving revision 1.24
retrieving revision 1.25
diff -u -r1.24 -r1.25
--- gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml 13 Mar 2009 16:51:20 -0000
1.24
+++ gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml 26 Jan 2010 20:45:08 -0000
1.25
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v
1.24 2009/03/13 16:51:20 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v
1.25 2010/01/26 20:45:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<guide lang="en">
+<guide>
<title>Gentoo Linux x86 with Software Raid and LVM2 Quick Install Guide</title>
<values>
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
<author title="Author">Steven Wagner</author>
<abstract>
-The Quick install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
+The Quick Install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
manner. Its purpose is to allow users to perform a stage3 install with software
-RAID and LVM2 in no time. Users should already have prior experience with
+RAID and LVM2 in no time. Users should already have prior experience with
installing Gentoo Linux if they want to follow this guide.
</abstract>
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
<license/>
-<version>14</version>
-<date>2009-03-13</date>
+<version>15</version>
+<date>2010-01-26</date>
<chapter>
<title>Introduction</title>
@@ -44,10 +44,11 @@
and Portage snapshots.
</p>
-<p>
+<impo>
New users should read the <uri link="/doc/en/handbook/index.xml">Handbook</uri>
-as it gives a better overview about the installation process.
-</p>
+as it gives a better overview about the installation process. The Quick Install
+guide is designed for experienced users who just need a checklist to follow.
+</impo>
<p>
Timing output follows all commands that take more than a couple of seconds to
1.84 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
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http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.84&view=markup
plain:
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diff :
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Index: gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.83
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diff -u -r1.83 -r1.84
--- gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 13 Mar 2009 16:51:20 -0000 1.83
+++ gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 26 Jan 2010 20:45:08 -0000 1.84
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.83
2009/03/13 16:51:20 neysx Exp $ -->
-
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.84
2010/01/26 20:45:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<guide lang="en">
+<guide>
<title>Gentoo Linux x86 Quick Install Guide</title>
<values>
@@ -20,7 +19,7 @@
<author title="Author">Steven Wagner</author>
<abstract>
-The Quick install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
+The Quick Install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
manner. Its purpose is to allow users to perform a stage3 install in no time.
Users should already have prior experience with installing Gentoo Linux if they
want to follow this guide.
@@ -30,8 +29,8 @@
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
<license/>
-<version>24</version>
-<date>2009-03-13</date>
+<version>25</version>
+<date>2010-01-26</date>
<chapter>
<title>Introduction</title>
@@ -39,15 +38,16 @@
<body>
<p>
-This guide contains all commands you should use to complete a stage3
+This guide contains all the commands you should use to complete a stage3
installation of Gentoo. You need a connection to the Internet to download the
stage3 and Portage snapshots.
</p>
-<p>
+<impo>
New users should read the <uri link="/doc/en/handbook/index.xml">Handbook</uri>
-as it gives a better overview about the installation process.
-</p>
+as it gives a better overview about the installation process. The Quick Install
+guide is designed for experienced users who just need a checklist to follow.
+</impo>
<p>
Timing output follows all commands that take more than a couple of seconds to
