nightmorph    10/07/18 19:02:16

  Modified:             ipv6.xml
  Log:
  GuideXML fixes, spacing, code tags, and add the commented license block to 
the start of the document

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1.35                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/ipv6.xml

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Index: ipv6.xml
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retrieving revision 1.34
retrieving revision 1.35
diff -u -r1.34 -r1.35
--- ipv6.xml    18 Jul 2010 18:51:07 -0000      1.34
+++ ipv6.xml    18 Jul 2010 19:02:16 -0000      1.35
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/ipv6.xml,v 1.34 2010/07/18 
18:51:07 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/ipv6.xml,v 1.35 2010/07/18 
19:02:16 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide>
@@ -30,6 +30,8 @@
 and configuring clients to use the system to connect to IPv6 addresses.
 </abstract>
 
+<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
 <version>2</version>
@@ -81,7 +83,6 @@
 
 </body>
 </section>
-
 <section>
 <title>Testing IPv6 Support</title>
 <body>
@@ -174,7 +175,6 @@
 
 </body>
 </section>
-
 <section>
 <title>Hurricane Electric</title>
 <body>
@@ -204,10 +204,18 @@
 </p>
 
 <table>
-<tr><ti>Local IPv4 Address (eth0)</ti><ti>68.36.91.195</ti></tr>
-<tr><ti>HE IPv4 Address</ti><ti>64.71.128.82</ti></tr>
-<tr><ti>Local IPv6 tunnel Address</ti><ti>2001:470:1F00:FFFF::189</ti></tr>
-<tr><ti>IPv6 Block</ti><ti>2001:470:1F00:296::/64</ti></tr>
+  <tr>
+    <ti>Local IPv4 Address (eth0)</ti><ti>68.36.91.195</ti>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <ti>HE IPv4 Address</ti><ti>64.71.128.82</ti>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <ti>Local IPv6 tunnel Address</ti><ti>2001:470:1F00:FFFF::189</ti>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <ti>IPv6 Block</ti><ti>2001:470:1F00:296::/64</ti>
+  </tr>
 </table>
 
 <p>
@@ -238,7 +246,7 @@
 <p>
 <uri link="http://gogonet.gogo6.com/";>Freenet6</uri> is another free tunnel
 broker. Optional registration only requires a username and a valid email
-address.  They have chosen to turn the tunnel management into a client/server
+address. They have chosen to turn the tunnel management into a client/server
 setup and have created the <c>gateway6</c> client. The client is available in
 Portage. To install it do:
 </p>
@@ -467,13 +475,13 @@
 
 <p>
 There are currently some third-party patches to DJBDNS available at
-<uri link="http://www.fefe.de/dns/";>http://www.fefe.de/dns/</uri> that allow
-it to do IPv6 nameserving. DJBDNS can be installed with these patches
-by emerging it with <e>ipv6</e> in your USE variables.
+<uri>http://www.fefe.de/dns/</uri> that allow it to do IPv6 nameserving. DJBDNS
+can be installed with these patches by emerging it with <e>ipv6</e> in your USE
+variables.
 </p>
 
 <warn>
-Not all record types are support yet with these patches.  In particular,
+Not all record types are support yet with these patches. In particular,
 NS and MX records are not supported.
 </warn>
 
@@ -544,8 +552,8 @@
 </pre>
 
 <warn>
-The radvd init script explained in the next chapter enables (and disables)
-forwarding, making the next step unnecessary.
+The <c>radvd</c> init script explained in the next chapter enables (and
+disables) forwarding, making the next step unnecessary.
 </warn>
 
 <p>
@@ -583,7 +591,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Stateless configuration is easily accomplished using the Router
-Advertisement Daemon, or radvd.
+Advertisement Daemon, or <c>radvd</c>.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Configuring radvd">
@@ -591,7 +599,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-After having emerged radvd, we need to create
+After having emerged <c>radvd</c>, we need to create
 <path>/etc/radvd/radvd.conf</path> that contains information about what
 IP block to assign IPs from. Here is a sample <path>radvd.conf</path>
 file using the prefix we've been assigned from our tunnel broker.
@@ -621,7 +629,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Further information is available in <c>man radvd.conf</c>. We can now
-start radvd and set it to start at boot.
+start <c>radvd</c> and set it to start at boot.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Starting up radvd">
@@ -720,8 +728,8 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-If your router is set up to use DHCPv6, your clients will also need to
-have the dhcpv6 package installed. After having done this, you need to
+If your router is set up to use DHCPv6, your clients will also need to have the
+<c>net-misc/dhcpv6</c> package installed. After having done this, you need to
 configure your client by editing <path>/etc/dhcp6c.conf</path>.
 </p>
 




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