swift 12/04/07 07:29:57 Modified: initramfs-guide.xml Log: English language improvements, no content. Thanks to chiguire for noticing and recommending the changes
Revision Changes Path 1.2 xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml?rev=1.2&view=markup plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml?r1=1.1&r2=1.2 Index: initramfs-guide.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml,v retrieving revision 1.1 retrieving revision 1.2 diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 --- initramfs-guide.xml 5 Apr 2012 19:40:55 -0000 1.1 +++ initramfs-guide.xml 7 Apr 2012 07:29:57 -0000 1.2 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml,v 1.1 2012/04/05 19:40:55 swift Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml,v 1.2 2012/04/07 07:29:57 swift Exp $ --> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> @@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ <p> Once the Linux kernel has control over the system (which it gets after being loaded by the boot loader), it prepares its memory structures and drivers as -good as it can. It then hands over control to an application (usually +well as it can. It then hands over control to an application (usually <c>init</c>) whose task it is to further prepare the system and make sure that, at the end of the boot process, all necessary services are running and the user -is able to log on. The <c>init</c> application does that by launching, amongst +is able to log on. The <c>init</c> application does that by launching, among other services, the <c>udev</c> daemon who will further load up and prepare the system based on the detected devices. When <c>udev</c> is launched, all remaining file systems that have not been mounted are mounted, and the remainder @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ </ul> <p> -To resolve these (for some perhaps hardly called) issues, the initramfs was +To resolve these (for some perhaps hardly called) problems, the initramfs was created. </p>
