raster pushed a commit to branch master.

http://git.enlightenment.org/website/www-content.git/commit/?id=5b668022bc0204333160175dfcff6feefda9e540

commit 5b668022bc0204333160175dfcff6feefda9e540
Author: Yomi <abyo...@gmail.com>
Date:   Wed Apr 29 12:58:46 2015 +0900

    Update title, fix typos, add .arcconfig and update .gitignore
    
    Summary:
    Changed title of start.txt from 'Enlightenment Main' to 'Enlightenment | 
Beauty at your fingertips. I suppose 'Enlightenment' would work fine too...
    
    Update title of start.txt, fix typos, add .arcconfig and update .gitignore.
    
    Reviewers: raster
    
    Differential Revision: https://phab.enlightenment.org/D2434
---
 .gitignore                                   |  1 +
 pages/about-enlightenment.txt                | 12 ++++++------
 pages/about-rage.txt                         |  4 ++--
 pages/about-terminology.txt                  |  2 +-
 pages/about.txt                              |  8 ++++----
 pages/docs/efl/mainloop.txt                  |  2 +-
 pages/docs/efl/ref/c/key/evas_object_del.txt |  2 +-
 pages/example.txt                            |  2 +-
 pages/media.txt                              |  2 +-
 9 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/.gitignore b/.gitignore
index 8a75e95..83a3390 100644
--- a/.gitignore
+++ b/.gitignore
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 *~
+*bak
 *swp
 *swo
 Session.vim
diff --git a/pages/about-enlightenment.txt b/pages/about-enlightenment.txt
index 2974879..28da947 100644
--- a/pages/about-enlightenment.txt
+++ b/pages/about-enlightenment.txt
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ try, or to be buzzing with activity and complexity, but this 
is up to
 you. Its default is somewhere in between these to give you a taste of
 what it can do on both ends of the spectrum.
 
-The default look is not what you are stuck with. Enlightenment was the
+You aren't stuck with the default theme. Enlightenment was the
 first Window Manager (WM) to introduce themes in X11 (pre-packaged
 sets of data that you just grab and select, providing you with a vast
 new look and feel). Today in Enlightenment, these themes come as
@@ -70,12 +70,12 @@ the default look will not be for everyone. It tries to 
strike a
 balance of being unique (not mimicking some other desktop look), yet
 still being stylish. It is meant to echo some of the past from where
 Enlightenment comes from, and yet roll in modern effects and feels. It
-sacrifices some "usability" for look, yet tries to keep a balance and
+sacrifices some "usability" for looks, yet tries to keep a balance and
 still be functional. It will not be for everyone, but it is hoped that
 it keeps you mostly happy until you find other themes that exactly
 meet your visual needs. You will find this as an on-going philosophy
 in Enlightenment. One size does NOT fit all. That's what options are
-for. Thats why we have themes. Do not have the misconception that what
+for. That's why we have themes. Do not assume that what
 you see is what you are stuck with. You are expected to experiment and
 discover what is good for you. Maybe the default is fine. Maybe it is
 not. That's why we pioneered themes and spent immense amounts of time
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ and more rolled into a single one. This gives better 
opportunities for
 efficiency, but makes things a little more fragile. To solve the
 fragility we have made error recovery very good with enlightenment
 catching its own errors and offering the ability to debug or just
-restart from where u left off and move on without losing any work. E17
+restart from where you left off and move on without losing any work. E17
 leaves a crash log file (~/.e-crashdump.txt) if you have gdb installed
 and you have debug symbols on.
 
@@ -176,8 +176,8 @@ latest and greatest hardware to run Enlightenment is what 
we are
 about. It's also not just one architecture. They may be stuck on
 something quite old (some 486), or want Enlightenment to work on
 something quite bizarre. We have gone to a lot of effort to make
-Enlightenment scale from anything like a 200Mhz ARM phone with 32M RAM
-all the way up to the latest multi-core, 64bit multi-Ghz and 16GB+
+Enlightenment scale from anything like a 200MHz ARM phone with 32M RAM
+all the way up to the latest multi-core, 64bit multi-GHz and 16GB+
 desktop beasts with 2 or more screens. We keep in mind the puny end of
 the spectrum all the way up to the beastly end. When we make decisions
 they try and ensure every part of this spectrum gets a fair go, and
diff --git a/pages/about-rage.txt b/pages/about-rage.txt
index fa25368..e8d27d1 100644
--- a/pages/about-rage.txt
+++ b/pages/about-rage.txt
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ mouseover of the position bar at the bottom of the window.
 
 It has a special music mode where it will try and fetch album covers
 by searching for them if missing (and caching them locally for future
-use). Make it easier to see what musinc is coming up next just by
+use). Make it easier to see what music is coming up next just by
 recognizing the album cover or image in the playlist.
 
 {{ :rage-music2.png?nolink|}}
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ know what is there. Scroll through massive lists all you like.
 {{:rage-playlist.png?&300 |}}
 
 If you want to seek to a specific part of the video you know well,
-just hover the mouse over the seke bar and get thumbnails of what part
+just hover the mouse over the seek bar and get thumbnails of that part
 of the timeline. **WARNING!** Spoiler alert!
 
 {{ :rage-thumbnails.png?&300|}}
diff --git a/pages/about-terminology.txt b/pages/about-terminology.txt
index 1117501..a9b0549 100644
--- a/pages/about-terminology.txt
+++ b/pages/about-terminology.txt
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ turned off by muting alerts).
 Terminology understands full file paths, URL links and email addresses
 in the terminal and will underline them on mouse-over so you can click
 and get more information such as gravatar information for that e-mail
-address, or to download the file from a url (and if it's a video or
+address, or to download the file from a URL (and if it's a video or
 animated gif, play it, otherwise just display it).
 
 {{ :terminology-link.png?&200|}}
diff --git a/pages/about.txt b/pages/about.txt
index b40a99b..194955b 100644
--- a/pages/about.txt
+++ b/pages/about.txt
@@ -114,13 +114,13 @@ Audio and even location. Some of the covered domains are:
   * Data archive handling
   * Freedesktop.org standard support
   * C Object model
-  * Compression and encyrption
+  * Compression and encryption
   * VM bytecode engine and compiler
   * UI data file theme and layout abstraction
-  * Device acces and tracking
+  * Device access and tracking
   * Async I/O
   * Input method handling
-  * Easy file handling utilitys
+  * Easy file handling utilities
   * Audio playback and recording
   * Avahi handling
   * Framebuffer, Wayland X11, Windows, OSX Cocoa, SDL, PS3, Linux DRM handling
@@ -172,5 +172,5 @@ See [[about-rage|the Rage page]] for more details.
 
 === Media ===
 
-If you want media like offical logos, screenshots etc. please see
+If you want media like official logos, screenshots etc. please see
 [[media|our media page]] for details.
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/pages/docs/efl/mainloop.txt b/pages/docs/efl/mainloop.txt
index 8c64e75..9c91fea 100644
--- a/pages/docs/efl/mainloop.txt
+++ b/pages/docs/efl/mainloop.txt
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Ecore events are called in strict order that they find 
themselves added to the q
 
 This is another very important stage for EFL. This is where EFL evaluates 
everything that has changed during the event handling and before, and will do 
things such as render updates to canvases, call pending/flagged calculation 
callbacks on objects and so on.
 
-EFL likes to defer work as long as possible to avoid doing it multiple times. 
thus doing a simple state change and deferring the hard "caculation" work until 
later does save doing it more often than needed a lot of the time. This is a 
general across EFL - to defer work until later whenever possible.
+EFL likes to defer work as long as possible to avoid doing it multiple times. 
thus doing a simple state change and deferring the hard "calculation" work 
until later does save doing it more often than needed a lot of the time. This 
is a general across EFL - to defer work until later whenever possible.
 
 As a result of calculating and implementing such calculations, it can happen 
that you may add jobs, which will be processed now after going idle. If you 
post events or jobs here, then the mainloop will go idle and immediately wake 
up (not calling any idlers as it spends no time sleeping due to pending 
events). Also actual UI events may be called here due to changing of object 
states, so be aware that this can happen early during entering idle, before 
rendering begins.
 
diff --git a/pages/docs/efl/ref/c/key/evas_object_del.txt 
b/pages/docs/efl/ref/c/key/evas_object_del.txt
index 2cc5d2c..ef4a81c 100644
--- a/pages/docs/efl/ref/c/key/evas_object_del.txt
+++ b/pages/docs/efl/ref/c/key/evas_object_del.txt
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ EVAS_CALLBACK_FOCUS_OUT event callbacks will also be called 
at this
 time.
 
 Note that all objects contained in an Evas canvas are deleted when the
-canvas is deleted, so there is no neeed to go delete them separately.
+canvas is deleted, so there is no need to go delete them separately.
 
 > <sub>//Since 1.0//</sub>
 
diff --git a/pages/example.txt b/pages/example.txt
index b774c23..45666e2 100644
--- a/pages/example.txt
+++ b/pages/example.txt
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ test if we can fold/unfold inline++. Then try a block below:
 
 ++++ Folded block here |
 
-The content wouldbe here
+The content would be here
 
 ^ Table ^ Blah ^ Blah   ^
 | Row   | Row  | Row    |
diff --git a/pages/media.txt b/pages/media.txt
index 102b5c4..5536024 100644
--- a/pages/media.txt
+++ b/pages/media.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ~~Title: Media~~
 
-Media for Enlightemnent
+Media for Enlightenment
 
 Logo as a PNG:
 

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