Jeremy White <jwh...@codeweavers.com> writes:

> Thanks for the feedback; new patch inbound.  Minor nits:
>
>>> diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt 
>>> b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
>>> index f7815e9..92f97e6 100644
>>> --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
>>> +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
>>> @@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ $ git show-branch --topo-order --more=1 master mybranch
>>>  ------------------------------------------------
>>>  
>>>  The first two lines indicate that it is showing the two branches
>>> -and the first line of the commit log message from their
>>> +and the first paragraph of the commit log message from their
>>>  top-of-the-tree commits, you are currently on `master` branch
>>>  (notice the asterisk `\*` character), and the first column for
>>>  the later output lines is used to show commits contained in the
>> 
>> Ditto.
>
> I did not substantially alter this. The emphasis of this section
> is on the broader show-branch output, and belaboring the subject would
> be distracting and unnecessary imho.

Yeah, but if that is the focus of this part of the documentation,
wouldn't a patch to update "the first line" with something more
generic like "title of the commit" be more appropriate?
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