[PATCH] clone,fetch: explain the shallow-clone option a little more clearly

[Alex Henrie]

"deepen by excluding" does not make sense because excluding a revision
does not deepen a repository; it makes the repository more shallow.

Signed-off-by: Alex Henrie <alexhenri...@gmail.com>
---
 builtin/clone.c | 2 +-
 builtin/fetch.c | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/builtin/clone.c b/builtin/clone.c
index 6c76a6e..e3cb808 100644
--- a/builtin/clone.c
+++ b/builtin/clone.c
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ static struct option builtin_clone_options[] = {
        OPT_STRING(0, "shallow-since", &option_since, N_("time"),
                    N_("create a shallow clone since a specific time")),
        OPT_STRING_LIST(0, "shallow-exclude", &option_not, N_("revision"),
-                       N_("deepen history of shallow clone by excluding rev")),
+                       N_("deepen history of shallow clone, excluding rev")),
        OPT_BOOL(0, "single-branch", &option_single_branch,
                    N_("clone only one branch, HEAD or --branch")),
        OPT_BOOL(0, "shallow-submodules", &option_shallow_submodules,
diff --git a/builtin/fetch.c b/builtin/fetch.c
index b6a5597..fc74c84 100644
--- a/builtin/fetch.c
+++ b/builtin/fetch.c
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ static struct option builtin_fetch_options[] = {
        OPT_STRING(0, "shallow-since", &deepen_since, N_("time"),
                   N_("deepen history of shallow repository based on time")),
        OPT_STRING_LIST(0, "shallow-exclude", &deepen_not, N_("revision"),
-                       N_("deepen history of shallow clone by excluding rev")),
+                       N_("deepen history of shallow clone, excluding rev")),
        OPT_INTEGER(0, "deepen", &deepen_relative,
                    N_("deepen history of shallow clone")),
        { OPTION_SET_INT, 0, "unshallow", &unshallow, NULL,
-- 
2.10.2