On Wed, Jan 11, 2017 at 2:21 AM, Junio C Hamano <gits...@pobox.com> wrote:
> Karthik Nayak <karthik....@gmail.com> writes:
>
>> index 81db67d74..08be8462c 100644
>> --- a/Documentation/git-for-each-ref.txt
>> +++ b/Documentation/git-for-each-ref.txt
>> @@ -95,13 +95,17 @@ refname::
>>       The name of the ref (the part after $GIT_DIR/).
>>       For a non-ambiguous short name of the ref append `:short`.
>>       The option core.warnAmbiguousRefs is used to select the strict
>> +     abbreviation mode. If `lstrip=<N>` is appended, strips `<N>`
>> +     slash-separated path components from the front of the refname
>> +     (e.g., `%(refname:lstrip=2)` turns `refs/tags/foo` into `foo` and
>> +     `%(refname:rstrip=2)` turns `refs/tags/foo` into `refs`).
>
> I hiccupped while reading this, as the (e.g.) example talks about rstrip
> that is not mentioned in the main text that is enhanced by the
> example.
>
>         If `lstrip=<N>` (`rstrip=<N>`) is appended, strips `<N>`
>         slash-separated path components from the front (tail) of the
>         refname (e.g. `%(refname:lstrip=2)` ...
>
> perhaps?
>
>> +     if `<N>` is a negative number, then only `<N>` path components
>> +     are left behind.
>
> Begin the sentence with cap?  I'd rephrase it a bit while at it if I
> were doing this:
>
>         If `<N>` is a negative number, strip as many path components
>         as necessary from the specified end to leave `-<N>` path
>         components.
>
> Other than the above, looks very good to me.
>
> Thanks.

I like how you rephrased it.
So apart form this and the other change suggested by you and Jacob,
nothing to be added.
Should I re-roll?

-- 
Regards,
Karthik Nayak

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