Hi,

Christian Couder wrote:

> The function calls itself "required", but it does not die when it
> sees an unexpected EOF.
> Let's rename it to "packet_key_val_read()".
>
> Signed-off-by: Christian Couder <chrisc...@tuxfamily.org>
> ---

nit: please wrap lines to a consistent width, to make the message
easier to read.  In the above, it looks like the line break is
intentional --- is it meant to be two paragraphs (i.e. is it missing
another newline)?

optional, just noticed while I'm nitpicking: the description 'rename
packet_required_key_val_read' doesn't tell why the function is being
renamed.  Maybe something like

        Git::Packet: clarify that packet_required_key_val_read allows EOF

would do the trick.

[...]
> +++ b/perl/Git/Packet.pm
> @@ -83,7 +83,8 @@ sub packet_txt_read {
>       return ( $res, $buf );
>  }
>  
> -sub packet_required_key_val_read {
> +# Read a text line and check that it is in the form "key=value"
> +sub packet_key_val_read {

This comment doesn't tell me how to use the function.  How do I detect
whether it successfully read a line?  What do the return values
represent?  What happens if the line it read doesn't match the key?

Thanks,
Jonathan

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