Thomas Ackermann wrote:
> --- a/Documentation/git.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/git.txt
> @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ and full access to internals.
>
> See linkgit:gittutorial[7] to get started, then see
> link:everyday.html[Everyday Git] for a useful minimum set of
> -commands. The link:user-manual.html[Git User's Manual] has a more
> +commands. The link:user-manual.html[The Git User's Manual] has a more
> in-depth introduction.
In the rendered version, this looks like:
The The Git User's Manual[1] has a more in-depth introduction.
Presumably the first "The" should be dropped from either the link or
the surrounding text.
[...]
> --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
> @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ work with a Git repository.
>
> If you just need to use Git as a revision control system you may prefer
> to start with "A Tutorial Introduction to Git" (linkgit:gittutorial[7]) or
> -link:user-manual.html[the Git User Manual].
> +link:user-manual.html[The Git User's Manual].
This comes out as
... you may prefer to start with "A Tutorial Instruction to Git"
(gittutorial(7)) or The Git User's Manual[1].
The capital 'T' in "The" looks a bit strange, but a lowercase 't' in
the corresponding footnote would also look strange. We can't have
everything, I guess.
A possible fix would be to drop the "The" from the link. The way you
have it here also seems fine.
[...]
> --- a/Documentation/gittutorial-2.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/gittutorial-2.txt
> @@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ pages for any of the git commands; one good place to
> start would be
> with the commands mentioned in link:everyday.html[Everyday Git]. You
> should be able to find any unknown jargon in linkgit:gitglossary[7].
>
> -The link:user-manual.html[Git User's Manual] provides a more
> +The link:user-manual.html[The Git User's Manual] provides a more
> comprehensive introduction to Git.
Doubled 'The'.
[...]
> --- a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
> @@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ digressions that may be interesting at this point are:
> * linkgit:gitworkflows[7]: Gives an overview of recommended
> workflows.
>
> - * link:everyday.html[Everyday Git with 20 Commands Or So]
> + * link:everyday.html[Everyday Git]
Isn't the old title more informative?
Thanks and hope that helps,
Jonathan
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