Thomas Gummerer <t.gumme...@gmail.com> writes: > On 10/10, Johannes Schindelin via GitGitGadget wrote: >> From: Johannes Schindelin <johannes.schinde...@gmx.de> >> >> The original phrasing of this paragraph made at least one person stumble >> over the word "from" (thinking that it was a typo and "from" was >> intended), and other readers chimed in, agreeing that it was confusing: >> https://public-inbox.org/git/0102016b8d597569-c1f6cfdc-cb45-4428-8737-cb1bc30655d8-000...@eu-west-1.amazonses.com/#t >> >> Let's rewrite that paragraph for clarity. >> >> Inspired-by-a-patch-by: Catalin Criste <cris_lin...@yahoo.com> >> Signed-off-by: Johannes Schindelin <johannes.schinde...@gmx.de> > > Thanks for picking this thread up again, I had already forgotten about > it. The updated wording sounds like an improvement to me.
To me too. I would have just done s/form/become/ out of laziness and aiming for conciseness, but the new and separate sentence is good, too. Thanks, both. > >> --- >> Documentation/git-stash.txt | 5 +++-- >> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) >> >> diff --git a/Documentation/git-stash.txt b/Documentation/git-stash.txt >> index 8fbe12c66c..53e1a1205d 100644 >> --- a/Documentation/git-stash.txt >> +++ b/Documentation/git-stash.txt >> @@ -87,8 +87,9 @@ The `--patch` option implies `--keep-index`. You can use >> save [-p|--patch] [-k|--[no-]keep-index] [-u|--include-untracked] >> [-a|--all] [-q|--quiet] [<message>]:: >> >> This option is deprecated in favour of 'git stash push'. It >> - differs from "stash push" in that it cannot take pathspecs, >> - and any non-option arguments form the message. >> + differs from "stash push" in that it cannot take pathspecs. >> + Instead, all non-option arguments are concatenated to form the stash >> + message. >> >> list [<options>]:: >> >> -- >> gitgitgadget
