On Thu, May 21, 2015 at 12:16 PM, Junio C Hamano <gits...@pobox.com> wrote:
> Eric Sunshine <sunsh...@sunshineco.com> writes:
>>> + puts(_("These are common Git commands used in various
>>> situations:"));
>>
>> The clause "in various situations" is quite nebulous and thus adds no
>> substance.
>
> FWIW I view the latter half of that sentence as explaining the group
> labels which we did not have (so we did not have to mention in the
> original).
Hmm, but is it necessary to explain the group labels in the first
place? The help output (group labels and all) seems self-explanatory
already, and one would expect (hope) that readers are intelligent
enough to understand implicitly that the group labels are a simple
organizational aid. If that understanding is indeed implicit, then
there should be no need to declare it explicitly and "in various
situations" becomes mere noise.
> Perhaps swapping the order may clarify, as the list
> itself is a two-level, i.e. list of workflow elements, each of which
> has list of commands?
Perhaps, but I may not be the best judge of that since, to me, that
level of hand-holding seems unnecessary.
Anyhow, it's just a minor observation, and it's something people can
argue later if they feel strongly about it, so I don't think it should
hold up this patch series.
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