El vie, 11-09-2009 a las 11:44 +0200, Sam Geeraerts escribió: > Luis Felipe Lopez Acevedo schreef: > > Hello all, > > > > I wrote a draft of the document about gNewSense that is part of the > > documentation team projects[1] and I'd like to ask if you could revise > > it and comment about it. >
Thanks for the feedback, Sam. > * Introduction: > - "find out what gNewSense is" > > * What is gNewSense: > - The screenshots image is a bit big. I need to use all of my 1024 > pixels in screen width to not have the image overlap the table of > contents. Wouldn't one of the screenshots suffice? Right, I'll change that. > - I feel a bit uneasy about mentioning Windows and the likes, although > you make it clear that they are non-free. It helps some people to get > the idea of what an operating system is. But when they read this, they > would've already booted into gNewSense, so I'd guess that they would > already see that it's similar to Windows. Well, the idea is to have this information in the wiki too, so people could be reading in a Web browser, in other operating system. I really don't see any harm in mentioning those names. > * Why Free Software > - Including the article is a good idea. But note that it's licensed > under GFDL no invariants, which is incompatible with CC-0 of the entire > document. > Then I'll use the same licenses we use for the content in the wiki. > Thanks for writing this, keep up the great work. Sorry for not > responding sooner, I wanted to be thourough rather then quick. > Thank you. _______________________________________________ gNewSense-dev mailing list gNewSense-dev@nongnu.org http://lists.nongnu.org/mailman/listinfo/gnewsense-dev