--- Ryan Paul <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi, > > I just finished the new gataxx docs. I have attached > a patch to this > e-mail as well as the complete docbook xml file. > Comments and criticism > are appreciated. Did I do everything right?
Yup, it all looks good. Some points: * Kill the version number in the manual title -- just remove ' V&manrevision;' from the <title> tag (this is something nearly all older docs suffer from by the way) * I agree with whoever said we don't need the screenshot of the main window. * Furthermore, in 2.14 the look of ataxx has been radically improved (ie it's no longer impossibly dark!), so the one showing the possible moves needs to be redone. * I'd remove the preferences screenshot too, as I don't think it adds anything. The user can easily see the real thing for himself. * Nitpick zone: the application tag is used in the overall manual title but not in the subheadings, eg '<title>Customizing Ataxx</title>'. However, I'm not sure which way round is correct, as I've seen a bit of both in our docs. Shaun, any thoughts on this? My gut feeling is that the title is already emphasized (then again, I'm not sure why the name of an app needs to be italicized throughout anyway) I'm happy to make these final tweaks myself and then commit :) -- though I'd appreciate someone supplying me with the scrneenshot of the possible moves. Perhaps this is a good time to use cropping and fading as discussed here: http://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=348495 Joachim ___________________________________________________________ Win tickets to the 2006 FIFA World Cup Germany with Yahoo! Messenger. http://advision.webevents.yahoo.com/fifaworldcup_uk/ _______________________________________________ gnome-doc-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list
