Hi, here's my first patch for GNOME documentation. These are a few things in the file manager pages I corrected in the Desktop Help while preparing the Ubuntu variant.
Jeremy Bicha
From 9e398b7c29b4b5a32cb8160d242384c4e4e78621 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jeremy Bicha <[email protected]> Date: Thu, 4 Aug 2011 19:45:50 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Minor corrections to file manager pages Corrects a few minor issues in Nautilus & file manager pages --- gnome-help/C/files-recover.page | 2 +- gnome-help/C/files-templates.page | 9 +++------ gnome-help/C/files.page | 2 +- gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page | 4 ++-- gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page | 2 +- 5 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page index d1137b3..aedb958 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ </p></item> </steps> -<p>If you deleted the file using <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>delete</key></keyseq>, or from the command line, the file can't be recovered using this method because it has been permanently deleted.</p> +<p>If you deleted the file using <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq>, or from the command line, the file can't be recovered using this method because it has been permanently deleted.</p> <p>There are a number of recovery tools available that are sometimes able to recover files that were permanently deleted. They are generally not very easy to use, however. If you accidentally permanently deleted a file, it's probably best to ask for advice on a support forum to see if you can recover it.</p> diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page b/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page index 41ce8a7..60bac5a 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/files-templates.page @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <info> <link type="guide" xref="files#faq"/> - <desc>Quickly create new documents from custom file templates (e.g. letterheads and memos).</desc> + <desc>Quickly create new documents from custom file templates.</desc> <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-28" status="stub"/> <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="review"/> @@ -12,13 +12,10 @@ <name>Anita Reitere</name> <email>[email protected]</email> </credit> - <license> - <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p> - </license> - + <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> </info> - <title>Templates for commonly-used types of document</title> + <title>Templates for commonly-used document types</title> <p>If you often create documents based on the same content, you might benefit from using file templates. A file template can be a document diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files.page b/gnome-help/C/files.page index c040731..5cb9529 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/files.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/files.page @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ <link xref="files-delete">delete files</link>, <link xref="files#backup">backups</link>, <link xref="files#removable">removable drives</link>... - </desc> + </desc> <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> </info> diff --git a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page index c445bb5..6df064a 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/hardware-cardreader.page @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ <title>My media card reader doesn't work</title> -<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (SecureDigital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia, +<p>Many computers contain readers for SD (Secure Digital), MMC (MultiMediaCard), SmartMedia, Memory Stick, CompactFlash, and other storage media cards. These should be automatically detected and <link xref="disk-partitions">mounted</link>. Here are some troubleshooting steps if they are not:</p> @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ readers are also available, and are far better supported by Linux.</p> <figure> <desc>In the depicted <gui>Computer</gui> window, a correctly-configured card reader is represented by three drives: <gui>CompactFlash</gui>, <gui>SmartMedia</gui>, and -<gui>SecureDigital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and +<gui>Secure Digital</gui>. Only the SD card is mounted, and is visible in the left column (where it says <em>31 MB F...</em>).</desc> <media type="image" mime="image/png" src="figures/hardware-cardreader.png"/> </figure> diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page index f4ab04e..425a605 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-behavior.page @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ and the trash behavior. In any file manager window, click </section> <section id="executable"> <title>Executable text files</title> - <p>An executable text file is a file that contains a program that you can run (execute). The <link xref="nautilus-file-properties-permissions#execute">file permissions</link> must also allow for the file to run as a program. The most common are Shell, Python, and Perl scripts. These have extensions .sh, .py, and .pl respectively.</p> + <p>An executable text file is a file that contains a program that you can run (execute). The <link xref="nautilus-file-properties-permissions#files">file permissions</link> must also allow for the file to run as a program. The most common are Shell, Python, and Perl scripts. These have extensions .sh, .py, and .pl respectively.</p> <p>You can select to <gui>Run executable text files when they are opened</gui>, <gui>View executable text files when they are opened</gui> or <gui>Ask each time</gui>. If the last option is selected, a dialog box will appear asking if you wish to run or view the selected text file.</p> -- 1.7.5.4
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