Dear Sonia, This is my opinion only with a personal suggestion not for the content (which I always read) but of the format (which makes it difficult for me to read.
The almost continuous thought by thought translation of Konkani and Portuguese to English is very distracting to the reader and one loses the complete context and understanding of what one reads. Solution: You must decide whom you want as readers: 1. Konkani speakers 2. English speakers who can understand rudimentary Konkani and Portuguese 3. Pure English speakers who understand very little of the other two languages 4. The not-so-rare Goan who has a fair knowledge of all three languages and is proficient in one and perhaps two of them. That’s a tough choice to make, but infinitely better than trying to please or rather reach all the above groups. I, if it interests you, belong to group 2. Looking forward to sensibly reading everything you write. Roland. Toronto. > On Feb 3, 2022, at 7:01 AM, Sonia Gomes <rgso...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Milagrin, one of the protagonists of my blog, has had many adventures. Now > she is at an age where she is beautiful, full of life and wants to see > life. And why not? > > Two men pursuing her and what is she to do? Help her decide. > > @ > > https://zorotmorotgoesmyvillage.blogspot.com/2022/02/milagrin-kazar-zata-kit-gho_2.html#more
