Gabe wrote: "Barad,
Your English writing it quite poor..."

I say,

Iambic pentameter is a common meter in English poetry 
and is most natural rhythm of the tongue:- 

Without meaning to 
Get in the wrangle,
My take I wish to
Thus propose, my angle -

Normal is a tangle
when one battles two
In dual a tingle
Like canker in the shoe

But know that he who
Cites other's bungle
Mindless that he too
Be hollow as a dingle!

Charudatta Prabhudesai






                                          

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