Gabe wrote: "Barad, Your English writing it quite poor..." I say, Iambic pentameter is a common meter in English poetry and is most natural rhythm of the tongue:- Without meaning to Get in the wrangle, My take I wish to Thus propose, my angle - Normal is a tangle when one battles two In dual a tingle Like canker in the shoe But know that he who Cites other's bungle Mindless that he too Be hollow as a dingle! Charudatta Prabhudesai _/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/ _/ _/ tambdimati: the Goa review is a community blog of original _/ art, writing, music, news and commentary from and about the _/ smallest state in the subcontinent. check out the newest _/ member of the Goanet family daily at _/ http://www.tambdimati.com. _/ _/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/