On 28/07/17 14:09, Luca Delucchi wrote:
On 27 July 2017 at 18:05, Anna Petrášová <kratocha...@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi Luca,


Hi,


* The bottom 'GRASS GIS' seems unnecessary, I would keep only the
logo, which I would align to the left and the url to the right

done

* In interfaces, I would skip "called wxGUI", I am not sure whether we
need to mention it's in wxPython, new users probably won't know about
the old GUI?

done

* Now you have there twice that GRASS is old, maybe I would replace
the sentence "It is the oldest..." with something like "GRASS GIS can
serve you as a desktop GIS, the backbone of a geospatial
infrastructure or as an innovation platform for scientific modeling."


sorry Anna I don't see the double GRASS is old, do you speak about "It
is the oldest and largest free" and "GRASS GIS was born more than 30
years ago"?


Yes, you could maybe just move the whole sentence "It is the oldest and largest free and open source GIS, but is still at the bleeding edge of innovation in GIS technology." into the paragraph entitled "A long term endeavour".

Also, I think paragraphs should be justified to a constant width.

Moritz

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