Perhaps address the points raised here: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/grow/XdDA44MyC-SRbyWtvOtdGd9ESFg/ <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/grow/XdDA44MyC-SRbyWtvOtdGd9ESFg/>
-- Jeff > On Apr 9, 2024, at 5:03 AM, Michael McBride <michael.mcbr...@futurewei.com> > wrote: > > Hi Job, > > Please let us know if there is anything needed to help progress this draft. > > Thanks, > mike > > > From: GROW <grow-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:grow-boun...@ietf.org>> On Behalf > Of Michael McBride > Sent: Wednesday, February 7, 2024 11:20 PM > To: David Farmer <far...@umn.edu <mailto:far...@umn.edu>> > Cc: grow@ietf.org <mailto:grow@ietf.org> > Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-09.txt > > Really appreciate the comments David, very helpful. > > I incorporated all of your additional suggestions (added sentence to security > section, created informational references section, moved links to > informational section). > > Back to you Job. > > Thank you. > mike > > > From: David Farmer <far...@umn.edu <mailto:far...@umn.edu>> > Sent: Wednesday, February 7, 2024 7:21 AM > To: Michael McBride <michael.mcbr...@futurewei.com > <mailto:michael.mcbr...@futurewei.com>> > Cc: grow@ietf.org <mailto:grow@ietf.org>; Job Snijders <j...@fastly.com > <mailto:j...@fastly.com>> > Subject: Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending-09.txt > > Also, the links to the articles "Geoff Huston's Path Prepending in BGP" and > "Excessive AS Path Prepending" should be informational references instead of > embedded links. > > Thanks > > On Wed, Feb 7, 2024 at 9:13 AM David Farmer <far...@umn.edu > <mailto:far...@umn.edu>> wrote: > Speaking of informational references, all the references are normative. That > doesn't seem correct. The references to RFC 5398, RFC 5738, and RFC 8195 seem > to be informational references, in my opinion. > > Thanks > > On Wed, Feb 7, 2024 at 9:03 AM David Farmer <far...@umn.edu > <mailto:far...@umn.edu>> wrote: > > > On Wed, Feb 7, 2024 at 7:54 AM Job Snijders <j...@fastly.com > <mailto:j...@fastly.com>> wrote: > On Tue, Feb 06, 2024 at 09:11:12PM -0600, David Farmer wrote: > > If you keep it as updating RFC 7454, I believe you need to say it does > > so in the abstract. Also, somewhere in the document, probably in the > > introduction, you need to explain how it updates RFC 7454, that is how > > this document relates to RFC 7454. > > Thanks David, that's how I understand the process too. > > If the contents of draft-ietf-grow-as-path-prepending actually update > 7454 (which currently doesn't seem the case), the working group has to > think about how that aligns with the 'big update' of 7454 happening in > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-bgpopsecupd/ > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-bgpopsecupd/> > > > Job, thanks for the pointer to the update of 7454. Given that it already > includes references to this document, that will ensure readers of it know > about this document. Which is the purpose of including the Updates metadata > header. > > I guess my final thought on the subject is whether there should be an > informational reference to RFC 7454, maybe in the security considerations > section. > > Here is a suggestion: Add a new final paragraph to the security > considerations section; > > For a more comprehensive discussion of BGP Operations and Security, see > [RFC7454]. > > Do with it what you will. > > Thanks. > > > -- > =============================================== > David Farmer Email:far...@umn.edu > <mailto:email%3afar...@umn.edu> > Networking & Telecommunication Services > Office of Information Technology > University of Minnesota > 2218 University Ave SE Phone: 612-626-0815 > Minneapolis, MN 55414-3029 Cell: 612-812-9952 > =============================================== > > > -- > =============================================== > David Farmer Email:far...@umn.edu > <mailto:email%3afar...@umn.edu> > Networking & Telecommunication Services > Office of Information Technology > University of Minnesota > 2218 University Ave SE Phone: 612-626-0815 > Minneapolis, MN 55414-3029 Cell: 612-812-9952 > =============================================== > > > -- > =============================================== > David Farmer Email:far...@umn.edu > <mailto:email%3afar...@umn.edu> > Networking & Telecommunication Services > Office of Information Technology > University of Minnesota > 2218 University Ave SE Phone: 612-626-0815 > Minneapolis, MN 55414-3029 Cell: 612-812-9952 > =============================================== > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list > GROW@ietf.org <mailto:GROW@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow>
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