Document: draft-ietf-grow-nrtm-v4 Title: Near Real Time Mirroring (NRTM) version 4 Reviewer: Menachem Dodge Review result: Has Nits
Hi, I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this Internet-Draft. The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that adequate operational considerations are covered. A complete set of _"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in IETF Specifications"_ can be found at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5706bis/. While these comments are primarily for the Operations and Management Area Directors (Ops ADs), the authors should consider them alongside other feedback received. - Document: draft-ietf-grow-nrtm-v4-08 - Reviewer: Menachem Dodge - Review Date: 4th March 2026 - Intended Status: Standards Track --- ## Summary - Has Nits: This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. This document specifies a one-way synchronization HTTP-based protocol for Internet Routing Registry (IRR) records, called Near Real Time Mirroring version 4 (NRTMv4). The protocol allows instances of IRR database servers to mirror IRR records, specified in the Routing Policy Specification Language (RPSL), between each other. The document specifies the role of the server and the client. It also gives instructions as to how to act as an intermediary server, acting both as a client and a server. ## Nits Section 3: Terminology Issue: Replace 'A' with 'An' Old: --> Version A incremental number that identifies the IRR Database at a particular point in time. Suggested: --> Version An incremental number that identifies the IRR Database at a particular point in time. Section 4.2 last paragraph Old: --> will generate two Update Notification Files, referring two Snapshot Files, and two sets of Delta Files each with contiguous version numbers - all completely independent to each other, with different session IDs Suggested: --> will generate two Update Notification Files, referring to two Snapshot Files, and two sets of Delta Files each with contiguous version numbers - all completely independent of each other, with different session IDs No other issues were found. Thank you kindly. Menachem Dodge _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
