On Mon, 21 Nov 2005, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Global Routing Operations Working Group of the IETF.Title : Classless Inter-Domain Routing (CIDR): The Internet Address Assignment and Aggregation Plan Author(s) : T. Li, V. Fuller Filename : draft-ietf-grow-rfc1519bis-03.txt Pages : 31 Date : 2005-11-21 This memo discusses the strategy for address assignment of the existing 32-bit IPv4 address space with a view toward conserving the address space and limiting the growth rate of global routing state. This document obsoletes the original CIDR spec [RFC1519], with changes made both to clarify the concepts it introduced and, after more than twelve years, to update the Internet community on the results of deploying the technology described.
Looking at the AD review comments, I don't think this update addresses them.
I also sent some personal comments on the list myself a bit after WGLC. As far as I can tell, these have been not been addressed. I will reiterate them at IETF LC but it might be easier to address them earlier rather than later.
The new section 11 is confusing editorially as there are double the number of bullet points compared to the before. A different xml2rfc technique (no new bullet point) should be used here.
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