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Author: Ludovic Courtès <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Sun Nov 24 18:09:17 2024 +0100

    website: Update draft post about Hurd on Thinkpad.
    
    * website/drafts/hurd-on-thinkpad-x60.md: Typos and nitpicks.
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diff --git a/website/drafts/hurd-on-thinkpad-x60.md 
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index 8a6fcbd..289cb44 100644
--- a/website/drafts/hurd-on-thinkpad-x60.md
+++ b/website/drafts/hurd-on-thinkpad-x60.md
@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@ slug: hurd-on-thinkpad
 tags: GNU/Hurd
 ---
 
-A lot has happened since our [Childhurds and GNU/Hurd
-Substitutes](https://guix.gnu.org/en/blog/2020/childhurds-and-substitutes/)
+A lot has happened with respect to [the Hurd](https://hurd.gnu.org)
+since our [_Childhurds and GNU/Hurd
+Substitutes_](https://guix.gnu.org/en/blog/2020/childhurds-and-substitutes/)
 post.  As long as two years ago some of you [have been
 asking](https://logs.guix.gnu.org/hurd/2022-05-15.log#070056) for a
 progress update and although there [have been
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@ longer.  So here is a short overview of our Hurd work over 
the past
 years:
 
   * Update [Hurd to 3ff7053, gnumach 1.8+git20220827, and fix build
-    
failures](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-03/msg02186.html)
+    
failures](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-03/msg02186.html),
 
   * A [native compilation fix for
     
gcc-boot0](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-guix/2023-05/msg00526.html),
@@ -47,12 +48,12 @@ years:
     so that all development dependencies of the guix package are now
     available,
 
-  * A hack to use git source in commencement to [update and fix cross
+  * A hack to use Git source in commencement to [update and fix cross
     build and native build for the
     
Hurd](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-07/msg00630.html),
 
-  * Support for buiding guix natively on the Hurd by splitting the
-    [guix build into more steps for 32bit
+  * Support for buiding `guix` natively on the Hurd by splitting the
+    [build into more steps for 32-bit
     hosts](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-guix/2023-08/msg00190.html)
 
   * Even nicer offloading support for Childhurds by [introducing Smart
@@ -60,19 +61,19 @@ years:
     so that now both the Bordeaux and Berlin build farms build
     packages for i586-gnu,
 
-  * Locale fixes for [wrong ‘glibc-utf8-locales’ package used on
+  * Locale fixes for [wrong `glibc-utf8-locales` package used on
     
GNU/Hurd](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-guix/2023-10/msg00223.html),
 
-  * More locale fixes to [use glibc-utf8-locales/hurd in
+  * More locale fixes to [use `glibc-utf8-locales/hurd` in
     
%standard-patch-inputs](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-11/msg01749.html),
 
   * And even more locale fixes for [using the right locales on
     
GNU/Hurd](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-11/msg01932.html),
 
-  * A [new GlibC
+  * A [new glibc
     
2.38](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-12/msg00343.html)
-    allowing us to do `(define-public glibc/hurd glibc)`, i.e., once
-    again use the same glibc for linux and hurd alike, and: Better
+    allowing us to do `(define-public glibc/hurd glibc)`—i.e., once
+    again use the same glibc for Linux and Hurd alike, and: Better
     Hurd support!,
 
   * Creation of [`hurd-team`
@@ -86,11 +87,11 @@ years:
     
notes](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2024-02/msg00035.html)
     that contain some nice ideas,
 
-  * Another [new GlibC
+  * Another [new glibc
     
2.39](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-commits/2024-02/msg00941.html);
     even better Hurd support, opening the door to `x86_64` support,
 
-  * Yet another [restoring of i586-gnu (GNU/Hurd)
+  * Yet another [restoring of i586-gnu (32-bit GNU/Hurd)
     
support](https://mail.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2024-08/msg00627.html),
 
   * The installer just [learnt about the
@@ -114,23 +115,23 @@ After we [resurrected the NetDDE
 build](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2023-05//msg00449.html),
 and with [kind help of the Hurd
 developers](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2023-05//msg00455.html)
-we finaly managed to [support NetDDE for the
+we finally managed to [support NetDDE for the
 
Hurd.](https://git.savannah.gnu.org/cgit/guix.git/commit/?id=9c1957921a1f53973c9b4b895f6d6d5fa63fe2dd).
 This allows the usage of the Intel 82573L Gigabit Ethernet Controller
 of the Thinkpad X60 (and many other network cards, possibly even
-WIFI).  Instead of using the builtin kernel driver in GNU Mach it
-would be running as a userland driver.
+WIFI).  Instead of using the builtin kernel driver in GNU Mach, it
+would be running *as a userland driver*.
 
 What sparked this development was upstream's NetBSD rumpdisk support
 that would allow using modern hard disks such as SSDs, again running
-as a userland driver.  The harddisk support builtin in GNU Mach was
+as a userland driver.  Hard disk support builtin in GNU Mach was
 once considered to be a nice hack but it only supported disks up to
-128GiB.
+128 GiB…
 
 First, we needed to [fix the cross build on
 Guix](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2023-05//msg00400.html).
 
-After the [Initial attempt at rumpdisk support for the
+After the [initial attempt at rumpdisk support for the
 Hurd](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-05/msg00633.html)
 it [took
 (v2)](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2023-05/msg00659.html)
@@ -150,8 +151,8 @@ What did not really help is that upstream's rumpkernel 
archive [was
 ridiculously
 large](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2023-06/msg00099.html).
 We managed to work with upstream to remove unused bits from the
-archive.  Upstream created a new archive that instead of 1.8GiB now
-only measures 670MiB.
+archive.  Upstream created a new archive that instead of 1.8 GiB (!) now
+“only” weighs 670 MiB.
 
 Anyway, after a lot of building, rebuilding, and debugging and some
 more with [kind help from
@@ -163,7 +164,7 @@ 
Childhurd](https://toot.aquilenet.fr/@civodul/110848429561223704).
 
 # Initial Guix/Hurd on the Thinkpad X60
 
-Now that the last(!) core-updates merge has finally happened (thanks
+Now that the last (!) `core-updates` merge has finally happened (thanks
 everyone!), the recipe of installing Guix/Hurd has been much
 simpfilied.  It goes something along these lines.
 
@@ -345,8 +346,8 @@ You may want to add some additional packages such as 
`git-minimal`
 from `(gnu packages version-control)` and `sqlite` from `(gnu packages
 sqlite)`.
 
-If you also intend to do guix development on the Hurd, e.g., debugging
-and fixing native package builds then you might want to include all
+If you also intend to do Guix development on the Hurd—e.g., debugging
+and fixing native package builds—then you might want to include all
 dependencies to build the guix package, see the
 
[`devel-hurd.tmpl`](https://git.savannah.gnu.org/cgit/guix.git/tree/gnu/system/examples/devel-hurd.tmpl?h=hurd-team)
 for inspiration on how to do that.  Note that any package you add must
@@ -394,7 +395,7 @@ it must currently be done manually, e.g., by booting from 
the
 installer USB stick.
 
 Upstream now has decent support for 64bit (x86_64) albeit [with more
-bugs and less
+bugs and fewer
 packages](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2024-07/msg00058.html).
 As mentioned in the overview [we are now
 working](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/guix-patches/2024-11/msg00708.html)
@@ -407,7 +408,7 @@ progress](https://todon.nl/@janneke/113457925305954698); 
more on that
 in another post.  Other interesting task for Guix include:
 
    * Have `guix system reconfigure` work on the Hurd,
-   * Figure out WIFI support with NetDDE (and add it to installer!),
+   * Figure out WiFi support with NetDDE (and add it to installer!),
    * An [isolated build
         environment](https://issues.guix.gnu.org/43857) (or better
         wait for, err, contribute to the [Guile
@@ -426,7 +427,7 @@ now includes:
      sponsored by [NLnet](https://nlnet.nl), thanks!),
    * 
[Rumpnet](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html//bug-hurd/2024-05/msg00002.html),
    * [SMP](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2024-09/msg00053.html),
-   * 
[Aarch64](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2024-03/msg00114.html).
+   * 
[AArch64](https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-hurd/2024-03/msg00114.html).
 
 All these tasks look daunting, and indeed that’s a lot of work ahead.
 But the development environment is certainly an advantage.  Take an
@@ -440,39 +441,3 @@ speed up development and make it a very nice experience.
 Join `#guix` and `#hurd` on
 [`libera.chat`](https://guix.gnu.org/en/contact/irc/) or the [mailing
 lists](https://guix.gnu.org/en/contact) and get involved!
-
-#### About GNU Guix
-
-[GNU Guix](https://www.gnu.org/software/guix) is a transactional package
-manager and an advanced distribution of the GNU system that [respects
-user
-freedom](https://www.gnu.org/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html).
-Guix can be used on top of any system running the Hurd or the Linux
-kernel, or it can be used as a standalone operating system distribution
-for i686, x86_64, ARMv7, and AArch64 machines.
-
-In addition to standard package management features, Guix supports
-transactional upgrades and roll-backs, unprivileged package management,
-per-user profiles, and garbage collection.  When used as a standalone
-GNU/Linux distribution, Guix offers a declarative, stateless approach to
-operating system configuration management.  Guix is highly customizable
-and hackable through [Guile](https://www.gnu.org/software/guile)
-programming interfaces and extensions to the
-[Scheme](http://schemers.org) language.
-
-#### About the GNU Hurd
-
-[The GNU Hurd](https://www.gnu.org/software/hurd) is the GNU project's
-replacement for the Unix kernel.  It is a collection of servers that
-run on the Mach microkernel to implement file systems, network
-protocols, file access control, and other features that are
-implemented by the Unix kernel or similar kernels (such as Linux).
-[More
-info](https://www.gnu.org/software/hurd/hurd/documentation.html).
-
-The [mission of the GNU
-Hurd](https://www.gnu.org/software/hurd/community/weblogs/antrik/hurd-mission-statement.html)
-project is to create a general-purpose kernel suitable for the GNU
-operating system, which is viable for everyday use, and gives users
-and programs as much control over their computing environment as
-possible.

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