Hi, I've tried to incorporate your collective feedback to https://github.com/malcook/sce/blob/master/MakingTheCase.org which this commit
https://github.com/malcook/sce/commit/917b55e1a0a9d8a5b79aa43b2a751db603cca34d?diff=split You can expect another round of edits once I get clear about some of Ricardo's thoughtful & detailed comments (to which I have just now replied with some add-on questions). Thanks everyone, this is very helpful to me, ~Malcolm > -----Original Message----- > From: guix-devel-bounces+mec=stowers....@gnu.org [mailto:guix-devel- > bounces+mec=stowers....@gnu.org] On Behalf Of Cook, Malcolm > Sent: Wednesday, February 10, 2016 10:02 AM > To: 'Ludovic Courtès' <l...@gnu.org>; 'Ricardo Wurmus' > <ricardo.wur...@mdc-berlin.de>; 'Pjotr Prins' <pjotr2...@thebird.nl>; 'Leo > Famulari' <l...@famulari.name> > Cc: 'Guix-devel' <guix-devel@gnu.org>; 'bio-packag...@mailman.open- > bio.org' <bio-packag...@mailman.open-bio.org> > Subject: RE: Making the case for GNU Guix ... advice sought > > Hi, > > Thanks everyone for the many valuable suggestions and education. > > Next week I intend to incorporate the suggested improvements as best I can > and follow up with an edit that I will use in-house, and share back out via > git- > hub. > > Though the document is aimed at my particular internal "project > justification", > I am trying to keep it generic, and will welcome suggestions for further > reshaping it to be of more general value should there be such interest from > y'all. > > GoGuix, > > Malcolm