Hi Juan &Falk,

I would suggest replacing the word "characterizes" with a word like "offers" 
(or maybe "provides") so the sentence reads: "gvSIG CE offers/provides rich 
vector data functionality".

Frank.



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Hello, very nice. I found two small errors I think: 

- "...based on based on gvSIG OADE..." 

- "gvSIG CE characterizes rich vector data functionality". I don't think this 
is grammatically correct. The other way round might be ok: "Rich vector data 
management characterizes gvSIG CE" but still doesn't sound like natural English 
to me. 

As for the content itself, may I suggest a mention to CIT (recently renamed to 
CITMA, http://www.cit.gva.es/cast/inicio/) as the founders of gvSIG? 


Regards, 
Juan Lucas 


--- On Tue, 8/30/11, Falk Krusche  wrote: 

> From: Falk Krusche 
> Subject: [Gvsigce-community] gvsig ce flyer 
> To: [email protected] 
> Date: Tuesday, August 30, 2011, 10:57 PM 
> Dear all, 
>
>
> I just finished the draft of the first gvsig ce flyer and 
> would like to 
> encourage everybody to have a look at design / content and 
> discuss it 
> here in the list. 
>
> You can download the flyer as pdf file from [1] or [2]. The 
> pdf file 
> consist of two pages (front and back side) which where 
> printed on one 
> paper sheet and then folded in the middle (vertical): This 
> results in 4 
> pages of 210mm height and 99mm width. 
>
> Till 9th september I could incorporate changes and finish 
> the flyer the 
> subsequent week. 
>
>
> Falk 
>
>
>
> [1] 
> http://www.indigomap.de/assets/downloads/Brochure_gvSIG_CE_DRAFT_30.08.2011.pdf
>  
> [2] 
> http://gvsigce.sourceforge.net/wiki/index.php/Documents#Local_Meeting_16.08.2011:_Release_Documentation
>  
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