Hi Juan &Falk,
I would suggest replacing the word "characterizes" with a word like "offers"
(or maybe "provides") so the sentence reads: "gvSIG CE offers/provides rich
vector data functionality".
Frank.
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Sent:2011-08-30 23:54:27
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Subject: Re: [Gvsigce-community] gvsig ce flyer
Hello, very nice. I found two small errors I think:
- "...based on based on gvSIG OADE..."
- "gvSIG CE characterizes rich vector data functionality". I don't think this
is grammatically correct. The other way round might be ok: "Rich vector data
management characterizes gvSIG CE" but still doesn't sound like natural English
to me.
As for the content itself, may I suggest a mention to CIT (recently renamed to
CITMA, http://www.cit.gva.es/cast/inicio/) as the founders of gvSIG?
Regards,
Juan Lucas
--- On Tue, 8/30/11, Falk Krusche wrote:
> From: Falk Krusche
> Subject: [Gvsigce-community] gvsig ce flyer
> To: [email protected]
> Date: Tuesday, August 30, 2011, 10:57 PM
> Dear all,
>
>
> I just finished the draft of the first gvsig ce flyer and
> would like to
> encourage everybody to have a look at design / content and
> discuss it
> here in the list.
>
> You can download the flyer as pdf file from [1] or [2]. The
> pdf file
> consist of two pages (front and back side) which where
> printed on one
> paper sheet and then folded in the middle (vertical): This
> results in 4
> pages of 210mm height and 99mm width.
>
> Till 9th september I could incorporate changes and finish
> the flyer the
> subsequent week.
>
>
> Falk
>
>
>
> [1]
> http://www.indigomap.de/assets/downloads/Brochure_gvSIG_CE_DRAFT_30.08.2011.pdf
>
> [2]
> http://gvsigce.sourceforge.net/wiki/index.php/Documents#Local_Meeting_16.08.2011:_Release_Documentation
>
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