All, the changes in draft version 18 are below:

   o  Update ORCHID reference to newly published RFC 7343

   o  Update example checksum section to RFC 7343 HIT prefix of
      2001:20::/28, and fix incorrect Header Length fields

   o  Update IANA considerations comment on legacy HIP_TRANSFORM
      parameter naming

   o  Add 2048-bit MODP DHE group as Group ID value 11.

I realized immediately after publishing version 18 (upon revisiting the tracker) that I hadn't updated the typo in the IPv6 documentation prefix in Appendix C, so I created draft version 19 for this. While doing so, I discovered that the reference to the IPv4 documentation prefix was wrong, so I fixed this. Finally, I reviewed Appendix E, Section 3.2, and RFC 7343 (per Francis Dupont's comment) and made a small change to Appendix E that I hope resolves the comment.

   o  Correct documentation prefix in Appendix C from 2001:D88/32 to
      2001:DB8/32, and update IPv6 checksum

   o  Correct documentation prefix reference from RFC 5747 to 5737

   o  Clarified HIT generation in Appendix E

To my knowledge, these updates close all previously raised issues on the draft. It may be worthwhile for another implementation team to confirm the new checksum values that I generated for Appendix C. I do have a question about the HIT Suite IDs that I'll post in another message.

- Tom

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