All, the changes in draft version 18 are below:
o Update ORCHID reference to newly published RFC 7343
o Update example checksum section to RFC 7343 HIT prefix of
2001:20::/28, and fix incorrect Header Length fields
o Update IANA considerations comment on legacy HIP_TRANSFORM
parameter naming
o Add 2048-bit MODP DHE group as Group ID value 11.
I realized immediately after publishing version 18 (upon revisiting the
tracker) that I hadn't updated the typo in the IPv6 documentation prefix
in Appendix C, so I created draft version 19 for this. While doing so,
I discovered that the reference to the IPv4 documentation prefix was
wrong, so I fixed this. Finally, I reviewed Appendix E, Section 3.2,
and RFC 7343 (per Francis Dupont's comment) and made a small change to
Appendix E that I hope resolves the comment.
o Correct documentation prefix in Appendix C from 2001:D88/32 to
2001:DB8/32, and update IPv6 checksum
o Correct documentation prefix reference from RFC 5747 to 5737
o Clarified HIT generation in Appendix E
To my knowledge, these updates close all previously raised issues on the
draft. It may be worthwhile for another implementation team to confirm
the new checksum values that I generated for Appendix C. I do have a
question about the HIT Suite IDs that I'll post in another message.
- Tom
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