Hi Miika, It looks good to me. I agree on moving to last call, pending further comments.
Spotted one typo in the new text: s/Eeach/each/ local address candidate MUST ... -Jeff On 2/1/17, 3:14 AM, "Hipsec on behalf of Miika Komu" <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: Hi, as you can see the diff link below, this version includes some minor editorial nits, but also some additional text in this section: 4.2. Transport Address Candidate Gathering The priority and RTO calculation formulas from the ICE specification are repeated here. Unless there are further comments, I would suggest moving the draft to last call. On 02/01/2017 12:58 PM, [email protected] wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Host Identity Protocol of the IETF. > > Title : Native NAT Traversal Mode for the Host Identity Protocol > Authors : Ari Keranen > Jan Melén > Miika Komu > Filename : draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15.txt > Pages : 52 > Date : 2017-02-01 > > Abstract: > This document specifies a new Network Address Translator (NAT) > traversal mode for the Host Identity Protocol (HIP). The new mode is > based on the Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) methodology > and UDP encapsulation of data and signaling traffic. The main > difference from the previously specified modes is the use of HIP > messages for all NAT traversal procedures. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal/ > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > Hipsec mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/hipsec > _______________________________________________ Hipsec mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/hipsec _______________________________________________ Hipsec mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/hipsec
