Corrected. Many thanks, Roland

Any other suggestions content-wise, folks?

Oleg


On Sat, 2006-04-22 at 14:31 +0200, Roland Weber wrote:
> Hi Oleg,
> 
> a few minor things. Since I've had problems with sending
> attachments to the list before, I'll just list them here:
> 
> news.xml:
>  (first paragraph, in <a>...</a>:) HttpComponentns
>  (second paragraph:) derived from _the_ ... code base
>  (third paragraph:) [remove both "the" from first sentence]
> 
> news.apt:
>  (first paragraph:) [remove "the" before "API review"]
> 
> status.apt:
>  (3.1:) The work on the RFC2965 cookie policy was kindly sponsored by Google.
>         [wrong RFC number, missing w of "was"]
>         [link to google.com or their Summer-of-Code site here?]
>  (4.0:) [remove "the" before "use in experimental projects"]
> 
> 
> cheers,
>   Roland
> 
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