I was going to let this mature a little before commenting on (e.g. the
references that need adding to the I-D References:-) but having just
looked at the other four, I had a brief look at this.
s.2 NMDA
could do with a reference to RFC8342
s.3 NSF name
Surely this must have come up before and be a candidate for a leafref?
Um, not so AFAICT. This surprises me and makes me realise I do not
understand the architecture as well as I might. I would have thought
that the earlier I-D has the concept of a named NSF in there somewhere
but no, nor do I see it in RFC8329. Mmm.
s.4
prefix nsffbck;
That is not what you are asking IANA to register:-)
/http:/https:/
leaf req-host {
type string;
description
"The domain name of the requested host";
a domain name is not a host name, different semantics, different syntax.
I suspect that host name is intended here. For domain names, look at
RFC1034. RFC1123 is probably the best source for hostnames.
leaf duration {
in several places; what are the units? is there an expected format,
precision etc.? If so, it might be worth creating a YANG type (but not
if it is just integer seconds).
s.6.1
<start-time>2021-08-27T09:00:00.00Z</start-time>
<start-date-time>2021-08-27T09:00:01.00Z</start-date-time>
Mmm an unfortunate inconsistency. The examples are correct in the sense
that those are the objects defined in the two I-D but it is unfortunate
that
xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring">
xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-feedback-policy">
are out of line. For me, it is start-time in nsf-monitoring that could
so with changing.
s.10.1
I will return to later in the document cycle.
Tom Petch
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Subject: I-D Action: draft-lingga-i2nsf-application-interface-dm-00.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
Title : I2NSF Application Interface YANG Data Model
Authors : Patrick Lingga
Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Yunchul Choi
Filename :
draft-lingga-i2nsf-application-interface-dm-00.txt
Pages : 32
Date : 2021-08-27
Abstract:
This document describes an information model and a YANG data model
for the Application Interface between an Interface to Network
Security Functions (I2NSF) Analyzer and Security Controller in an
I2NSF system in a Network Functions Virtualization (NFV)
environment.
The information model and YANG data model is based on the I2NSF
Consumer-Facing Interface for enabling feedback delivery based on
the
information received from the Network Security Function (NSF).
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