Hi Tom, the co-authors and I will review your comments and revise our draft according to your comments.
Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Tue, Sep 28, 2021 at 7:59 PM tom petch <[email protected]> wrote: > From: I2nsf <[email protected]> on behalf of [email protected] > <[email protected]> > Sent: 15 September 2021 17:28 > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions > WG of the IETF. > > Title : I2NSF Registration Interface YANG Data Model > Authors : Sangwon Hyun > Jaehoon Paul Jeong > Taekyun Roh > Sarang Wi > Jung-Soo Park > Filename : draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-12.txt > Pages : 46 > Date : 2021-09-15 > > <tp> > I am confused about 'name'. This appears in the Information model in > s.4.1 as 'NSF name' but I cannot see that in the YANG. > > The YANG has capability-name in two places once described as 'Unique name > of this NSF's capability', the other as 'Unique name of this registered > NSF'. > > So how is an instance of an NSF identified? > > When you create a name, you create a namespace and I see it as good > practice to say something about that namespace, about its reach, the need > for uniqueness and so on, like 'The name MUST be unique within ...'. > > s.2 NMDA could so with a reference to RFC8342. > > s.5.2 > When you import an IETF module you must use the prefix that the module > itself specifies; for capability that is nsfcap. This also appears in the > examples. > > The examples use a port of 3000. This port number is registered with IANA > for HBCI. I do not know what HBCI is; do you? > > Tom Petch > > > Abstract: > This document defines an information model and a YANG data model for > Registration Interface between Security Controller and Developer's > Management System (DMS) in the Interface to Network Security > Functions (I2NSF) framework to register Network Security Functions > (NSF) of the DMS with the Security Controller. The objective of > these information and data models is to support NSF capability > registration and query via I2NSF Registration Interface. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm/ > > There is also an htmlized version available at: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-12 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-12 > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >
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