Hi Tim, We authors have addressed your comments in the beginning of Section 11. The update is as follows: ------------------ - OLD:
11. XML Examples for I2NSF NSF Monitoring This section shows the XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. - NEW: 11. XML Examples for I2NSF NSF Monitoring This section shows the XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. In order for the XML to work, the prefix in the element that uses "identityref" type (e.g., /i2nsf-event/i2nsf-system-detection-alarm/alarm-category/) in the YANG module described in this document MUST be the same as the namespace prefix for urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf- monitoring. The XML software MUST be chosen that makes the namespace prefix information available. ------------------ Is this update fine to you? Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Fri, Dec 17, 2021 at 12:03 PM Tim Bray <tb...@textuality.com> wrote: > Sorry, but this has the same problem in figure 11.1 that we've just been > discussing with Ian. > > For it to work, (a) the prefix in the alarm-category element MUST be the > same as the namespace prefix for > urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring, which means that XML > software MUST be chosen that makes the namespace prefix information > available. I don't think it's OK for the draft not to say those thigns. > > <alarm-category > xmlns:nsfmi="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:\ > ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring"> > nsfmi:memory-alarm > </alarm-category> > > > On Thu, Dec 16, 2021 at 4:25 PM Amanda Baber via RT < > drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org> wrote: > >> Hi Tim and Martin (cc: i2nsf WG), >> >> Have you had a chance to review the XML registration in this document? >> >> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model/ >> >> thanks, >> Amanda >> >> On Tue Nov 30 21:38:22 2021, michelle.cotton wrote: >> > Dear Tim and Martin, >> > (cc to i2nsf WG) >> > >> > As the designated experts for the ns IETF xml registry, can you review >> > the proposed registration in draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data- >> > model-12 for us? Please see >> > >> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data- >> > model/ >> > >> > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, >> > we'll make the registration at >> > >> > https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry >> > >> > The IESG has asked us to set a two-week deadline for registration >> > reviews. The due date for this request is 14 December 2021. >> > >> > Thank you, >> > >> > Michelle Cotton >> > IANA Services >> >> _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > I2nsf@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >
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