Hi,
I was just reviewing the latest version of this draft to see what had
changed since my last review and spotted a few potential trivial typos,
in case you have time to correct them:
1. Last paragraph of 1. Introduction:
"Section 7 provided" => " Section 7 provides"
2. 1.
"filtered evens" => "filtered events"?
7. Ephemeral-REQ-12
"(which includes indicating data node the collision occurred on) =>
"(which includes indicating the data node that the collision occurred on)"
Otherwise the draft looks fine to me.
Thanks,
Rob
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