Hi Rodney, Thanks for your comments. We will provide some reference/description in next revision.
Best regards, Jie > -----邮件原件----- > 发件人: i2rs [mailto:[email protected]] 代表 Rodney Cummings > 发送时间: 2018年7月12日 8:29 > 收件人: [email protected] > 主题: Re: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10 > > Hello all, > > I just realized that I included the wrong I-D in my subject line. I intended > this > comment for: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > and not > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology > > I apologize for the mistake. > > Rodney Cummings > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: i2rs <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Rodney Cummings > > Sent: Tuesday, July 10, 2018 2:53 PM > > To: [email protected] > > Subject: [i2rs] Comment: > > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology- > > 10 > > > > Hello, > > > > This module does not provide sufficient description/reference text. > > For > > example: > > - What is a "VLAN ID"? > > - What is a "TRILL Nickname"? > > - What is a "VxLAN Network Indentifier"? > > - What is "QinQ"? > > - What is a "Shared Risk Link Group"? > > - Where does "Maximum frame size" begin and end for a given media? > > > > If the author prefers to avoid a description, at least a reference > > should be provided so that the normative definition can be determined. > > > > Rodney Cummings > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > From: i2rs <[email protected]> On Behalf Of > > > [email protected] > > > Sent: Saturday, June 30, 2018 1:42 AM > > > To: [email protected] > > > Cc: [email protected] > > > Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > > > topology-10.txt > > > > > > > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > > > directories. > > > This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG > > > of > > the > > > IETF. > > > > > > Title : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data > > > Center Networks > > > Authors : Yan Zhuang > > > Danian Shi > > > Rong Gu > > > Hariharan Ananthakrishnan > > > Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology- > > > 10.txt > > > Pages : 31 > > > Date : 2018-06-29 > > > > > > Abstract: > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data > > > Center Networks and it represents only one possible view of the dc > > > fabric. > > > > > > > > > The IETF 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