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Izumi

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Subject: CRISP Team comment on the 2nd draft of the SLA
Date: Tue, 01 Sep 2015 08:50:41 +0900
From: Izumi Okutani <[email protected]>
To: [email protected] <[email protected]>

Dear NRO,



The CRISP Team appreciates the opportunity to review and comment on the 2nd 
draft of the SLA for the IANA Numbering Services.

We believe the process of calling for comment for the 2nd draft, and a document 
with the comments received during the consultation period and the legal team 
responses demonstrates transparency in the process of preparing implementation 
of the proposal. We thank the RIR legal team and NRO EC for taking these steps.

In reviewing the 2nd version of the SLA from the perspectives described below, 
the CRISP Team observe that the draft SLA is consistent with the number 
community proposal. 

 - CRISP Team comment for SLA ver.1 are adequately addressed
 - No consistencies with the number community proposal over additional edits 
for SLA ver.2

Please see the attached document for details of the observation by the CRISP 
Team on the 2nd draft of the SLA.

In terms of the process, we agree with the future steps described in the draft 
SLA as below:

"All comments received by the deadline will be processed by the legal team of 
the RIRs and, as
appropriate, included in a further and final draft of the SLA which will be 
presented to ICANN as
the proposed final SLA. It is hoped that this document will be agreed by ICANN 
without further
changes."

Further, the CRISP Team expects the final SLA to remain consistent with the 
number community proposal, given consultation process has taken place, 
including feedback from the ICANN Board.
The CRISP Team has confidence that the NRO maintains and continues the process 
to be accountable to the number community throughout the implementation, and 
expects the NRO to have clarity in the process for the number community, beyond 
negotiation with ICANN.


Best Regards,


Izumi Okutani, Nurani Nimpuno
Chair and Vice Chair, the CRISP Team



Attachment: The CRISP Team comments on the Second Draft SLA.pdf
Description: Adobe PDF document

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