> I think that would just about do it, modulo an issue about "on
> the wire" (see below).  

Yes, I wasn't very comfortable with using that term in my text.

> At worst, it would make things clear
> enough that the text could be fine-tuned in the next cycle if
> that proved necessary.

For "next cycle" = "when documents move to draft standard" I assume?

> It could probably even be clarified and streamlined further,
> e.g., after "does not attempt to define an 'internationalized
> host name'"
> 
>       Just as has been the case with LDH names, some zone
>       administrators may impose restrictions, beyond those
>       imposed by the protocol, on the characters or strings
>       that may be registered as labels in their zones.  Such
>       restrictions do not impact the protocols themselves; a
>       query for a name that does not exist will yield the same
>       response regardless of the reason why it is not in the
>       relevant zone.   Restrictions imposed on a per-zone
>       basis MUST NOT have any impact on the behavior of the
>       on-the-wire protocol, and MUST NOT assume that clients
>       issuing queries or interpreting responses will have any
>       knowledge of zone-specific restrictions or conventions.

Looks good to me.

Thanks,
  Erik


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